Alone in Paradise chapter 7
music by Hasan Shirazi
next day
Geet: woke up early morning saw Dadi talking to her new attendant
Dadi: good morning beta
Geet: good morning i slept so sound
Dadi: because you are in your own home
Geet: smiled.
Dadi:come on get ready today you have to do alot of work
Geet: like sit on bed
Dadi: first you will go & buy nice dress for your self
Geet: what for?
Dadi: for evening party
Geet: i have
Dadi: no argument beta.. go & freshen up
Geet: ok
After a while ...
Dadi: beta take me out side
Geet: sure dadi .... she push her wheel chair out
Dadi: beta morning walk is good for health
Geet: dadi i never had car i daily use to walk mile
Dadi: pat her cheek "i know beta , but now you have car so you daily walk in garden"
Geet: ok i will she push her wheel chair on the path
Dadi: when ever i see you ,i feel i am young again
Gate keeper : madam
Dadi: yes..
Gatekeeper: i boy gave this.. he gave flowers to Geet
Geet: not again.... she feel shy
Dadi: take it beta , someone really love you
Geet: dadi it is not for me
Gatekeeper: madam see this paper your name is written on this.
Dadi: let me see
Maan: from back snatched the papers from dadi hand.."Miss Geet Handa. address Khurana Mansion "
Dadi:Maan
Geet: i swear i don't know the sender
Maan: we are not asking you...
Geet: angrily looked at her .. she was about to throw the flowers
Maan:grab it from her hand
Dadi: what are you doing here Maan?
Maan: "just came out to see last sun rise of 2010 " he took wheel chair from Geet
Geet: was silently walking
Dadi: Maan you send car at 10
Maan: why?
Dadi: Geet has to do some shopping
Maan: looked at Geet "ahaan"
Geet: "but i don't want"
Dadi: beta no argument ...
Maan:Dadi you don't worry i will send.
Geet: was about to go in
Maan: your flowers bouquet
Geet: snatch from his hand walk in
Maan: don't throw ..... said bit loud ... had a laughter
Dadi: Maan are you the sender
Maan: why i send her?
Dadi: i feel that sender is you
Maan: come on Dadi
Dadi: come on Maan don't hide from me
Maan: i have to get ready ...walk in..
Dadi: gotcha Maan
after a while
Geet: pata nai why dadi is asking me to go for shopping.. while fixing her duppata.
Dadi: beta are you ready
Geet: yes..
Dadi: come here
Geet: walk to her
Dadi: "take this & buy what ever you like"
Geet: looked at her credit card.." i don't need it"
Dadi: beta no argument ,go driver is waiting
Geet: ok she walked out .... she open back door
Maan: i am not your driver madam
Geet: you
Maan: yes me .. he open front door
Geet: why you...paused
Maan: don't think i am taking you for shopping, as dadi asked me to take you tonight with me i wanted to be sure you look perfect.
Geet: she didnot force you, you can take anyone else
Maan: no its ok you can accompany me
They reached to a designer shop
Geet: why you stop here?
Maan: i want to buy skirt
Geet: skirt
Maan: yes i will wear tonight..
Geet: oh you are ... put her hand on her mouth
Maan: what ?
Geet: you will wear skirt that mean's you are ....paused
Maan: what?
Geet: 50/50
Maan: how dare you? he got what she wanted to say....
Geet: what you yourself side you want to wear skirt ?
Maan: i did a mistake i came with you... he walk to shop
Geet: followed him..."he doesn't know i don't like western dresses"
Maan: select what you like?
Geet: if i don't
Maan: try this .. give her a dress
Geet: me
Maan: no me
Geet: ok you try then
Maan: don't try to be funny quickly change or i will .. he took two steps towards her
Geet: wait wait i will change.. she walk to trial room..."uff itna chota chota kapra .."
Maan: knocked at door "be quick"
Geet: uff.. what kind of job is this? she try to pull the dress
Maan: are you done?
Geet:yes
Maan: let me see
Geet: wait ... she picked up a decoration
Maan: enter he saw Geet standing in a corner "why light is that dim?"
Geet: i did it...
Maan: looked at her she was not looking at him "you can change" he walk out
Geet: who was holding her breath released ..."uff" she quickly changed
Maan: yes pack that dress .. he said to the salesman
Geet: "you can go i will go home myself"
Maan: i will drop you....
Geet: quietly seated
At home
Maan: "i will send car for you at 9, as the new year party is from my side ,... looked at her "so you will be the host be ready in time"
Geet: ok .. she just get off car walk in with out looking at him
Maan: quite rude no thank you , liked your attitude madam ...
Geet: was irritated .. walk to bed room
Dadi: you are back
Geet: yes
Dadi: let me see what you got?
Geet: gave her the box .. & sit on her bed
Dadi: looked the dress .. did you select this ?
Geet: no your grand son
Dadi: Maan.. shocked
Geet: yes
Dadi: how he came there?
Geet: he didn't send the driver , he him self came ..
Dadi: hmmm
Geet: he wanted i should look perfect .
Dadi: hide her smile.. "what else he said?"
Geet: " if i will look bad it will be his insult "
Dadi: oh beta ...
Geet: i ask him to take someone else if he has that much problem
Dadi: what he said?
Geet: he said you will accompany me , you are the host .
Dadi: smiled
Geet: why are you smiling ?
Dadi: what to do then?
Geet: aik tou he asked me to wear those small dress ... ufff what kind of job it is?
Dadi: but beta this is not a ... paused
Geet: i will leave this job
Dadi: come here ... ask her to come close to her ...
Geet: walked ..
Dadi: beta i am sorry from his side
Geet: why you are saying that?
Dadi: Because he made you sad.
Geet: smiled i am fine
Dadi: "beta i will ask him not to tease you or order you "
Geet: ok
Dadi: i hope you will not leave the job
Geet: i will not.
Dadi: hug her " beta enjoy life "
Geet: life didn't gave me opportunity for recreation
Dadi: now you have chance so you enjoy
Geet: but this will not stay for ever
Dadi: it can stay for ever beta..
Geet: how?
Dadi: time will tell .. now lets have lunch.
In evening
Dadi: beta get ready
Geet: i don't feel like going
Dadi: you have to go it's my order now go & change
Geet: i don't like this dress
Dadi: beta wear it is a decent saree
Geet: saree .. shocked open the box
Dadi: yes see it is a saree .
Geet: but i wore a different dress
Dadi: smiled pat her cheek beta he is naughty he might be testing you.
Geet: recollected he just enter the changing room & left..
Dadi: now go & change
Geet smiled walked to changing room
Dadi: beta be quick don't be late
Geet: yes i am coming
walk out gracefully handling saree
Dadi: perfect
Geet: shyly smiled
Dadi: go
Geet: see you.
Geet reached the hotel
Driver : madam we reached
Geet: thx.. i never in my life attended such parties.... walk in
Manager : Are you Miss Geet?
Geet: yes
Manager: you have to go on roof
Geet: roof
Manager: yes party is there.
Geet: ok .. she say pinky
Pinky: hi Geet i am
Geet: Pinky
Pinky: yes Maan sir asked you to come up
Geet: ok ...
Maan was walking near the pool his eyes was at lift door " Perfect " talking to himself
Geet: was talking to Pinky .. she didnot notice they reached
Pinky:my job done , there is Maan sir you go
Geet: confusedly walk to him ,who had his back towards her
Geet : i am here
Maan: hmmmm looked at her while drinking
Geet: tell me what should i do ?
Maan: grab her arm "come with me"
Geet was not expecting she walked with him .. Maan was walking very fast..
Geet: "please slow "
Maan: looked at her...."you always have problem"
Geet: angrily looked at him try to take long step .. her saree stuck .she grab his sleeve .. she was about to fall down
Maan:hold her by her waist "stubborn"
Geet: leave me
Maan: i will not... he pull her more close as he saw nt coming
nt: hi Maan
Maan: hi where is your partner ?
nt: you are my partner
Maan: sorry i am not i am with my cousin today.. he pull Geet next to him
Geet: looked at him in surprise
Maan wink at Geet
nt: your cousin .. she looked at Geet from head to toe
Maan: yes why any problem?
nt: she doesn't look like your cousin. gosh wearing saree in new year eve.. how old fashion?
Maan: bring your partner first then enter my party....
Dev: oh Maan i am with her
Maan: hi
DEV: oh hi you might be Maan cousin
Geet: looked at Dev then at Maan...
Maan: pinch Geet arm
Geet: ouch .. looked at Maan he with eyes ask her to shake hand with Dev
nt: how back ward is his cousin.. walk
Geet: why you told them lie?
Maan: what i did?
Geet: why you told them i am your cousin?
Maan: awiie ..( just like that)
Geet: you .. try to free her arm
Maan: you are so angry as if i called you my wife
Geet: i am not.. try to walk away
Maan: you can be if you want.. he held more tightly
more guest arrived ..
Pari: oh Geet why he is saying you are his cousin?
Geet: ask him.. he is crazy
Pari:Maan she is my room mate
Maan: so
Pari: why you said she is your?
Maan: because i like to say & you don't dare tell any one ... either wise you know me very well...
Pari: my lips sealed "hi Maan cousin glad to see you in new year party"
Geet: you too making fun of me
Pari: i always use to say to you one day you will attended such parties
Geet: Pari i will kill you .. she try to hit Pari .. but Pari hide behind Maan..Geet bang in Maan chest
Maan: oh so you started treating me as your husband... hug her back
Geet: leave me
Maan: you are holding me ..he showed her hand
Pari: smiled ... " geet will you dance today"
Geet :no never
Maan:she does not know anything.. smiled left her
Geet: how dare he ... Pari i will dance
walked behind Maan.. grab a glass from tray and drank without looking at it
Maan walked to the stage ... grab Mic be with your partners ... "i wish a very Happy new year to you all. i pray & wish next year you are with same partners. "he held Geet hand as the light was switched off ...
Music was played
Maan: what ?
Geet: i can dance..
Maan: could hear her shaky voice ..." have you taken some thing"
Geet: yes i can drink too .. waved glass in front of him
Maan: oh S***.. he grab her from her waist... took away the glass
Geet: i want to dance...
Maan: pull her away from guest "yes ... you dance.... "hold her more close ..
Geet: am i looking old fashion in saree.. she stare in his yes
Maan: no you look out standing
Geet:thank you for the saree .. whisper
Maan: just a thank you..
Geet: aur kya kaho.. looked at him in drowsy eyes
Maan: anything
Geet: suniya ..pull him closed whisper in his ears
Maan: hmmm
Geet: will you be with me next year too
Maan: yes i will be
Geet: kissed him .. it was so sudden he did not had time to react ....
Maan looked around everyone was busy... ...
Geet "now fine" smiled
Maan: perfect.. could still feel her soft touch....
Geet: i am sleep ...
Maan: ok you sit here i will come in a min
Geet: ok
Maan: asked dev to take over from her
nt: you are going
Maan : yes my cousin is sleepy
nt: had a laughter ... she is unlike you.
Maan : so.. he saw Geet resting her head on table & sleeping.. "see you all" he walked to her .. "Geet get up"
Geet: " i am sleepy"
Maan: pat her cheek she does not reply
nt: i think she had drink for the first time
Maan: picked her up in her arms & walk out
nt: i will see your cousin...
Maan : made her lay on seat... " what i will say to Dadi now?" he drive home...
Maan: geet get up
Geet was fast a sleep ..
Maan: " ok i will hear scolding from dadi" picked her up....
Dadi: Maan.. as she hear his foot step
Maan: yes dadi walk in
Dadi: what happen to her? as she saw Geet in his arms
Maan: she is asleep .. made her lay on her bed.
Dadi: asleep or she had something
Maan: tug in blanket " dadi "
Dadi: she is drank ...
Maan: yes...
Dadi: you can't take care of her
Maan: dadi i just left her for 5 mins she had that drink..
Dadi: now why are you sitting here go...
Maan: ok... looked at her walk out
i wish you all have happy & prosperous year. i wish we all enjoy the coming year with are close onces,& we stay with are loved in coming years.. Amen tight hug to all don't let go your loved one's at any cost .. special thx to you for being there with me lu
originally posted athttp://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1537129&TPN=60
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Despair Chapter 26
Geet: what is he saying Maan? .. stopped him to take walk
Maan: nothing i think he is drunk .. pull her to walk
Geet: let me talk to him first... she try to stop him
Maan: first you complete rituals .. he pull her with him & walk around fire
Devmom: loudly " world is filled with girls why you are marrying to a sick girl Maan"
Beeji : i think you are mistaken
Devmom: why i will spread a fake news
Geet: Maan stop this she stop...he try to make her walk but she didn't move..
nt: to sasha " she will walk away"
Dadi: Geet beta complete it
Geet: i will not
Maan: suddenly picked her up & took the last round" i will not stop"
Meera: smiled
Geet: this is not fair
Maan: everything is fair in love & war
priest : you are now husband & wife
Devmom: with a open mouth stand still.
Geet: please let me stand
Maan: no you will again try to run.. he held her more tight
Geet: let me talk to him why he said i am sick?
Maan: that is all a melodrama
Geet: no it was not as your face was pale at that time
Maan: will you stop this .. he said bit loud
Geet: you let me stand..
Maan: made her stand ..
both took Dadi's blessing
Dadi: hug them back
Maan: dadi i am coming ..he walk to rahul
Geet was about to go behind him but Meera & beeji stop her
Meera: i am sorry geet i don't know why my in laws created scene.. she hug her
Geet: didi i am sick
Meera: don't say like that
Geet: Didi Maan face told me i am
Meera: did notice her self .."Geet you are not"
they both heard Maan shouting
Geet: quickly ran to them
Maan: it is my life who are you to say all that
Rahul: i was trying to save you
Maan: no need to save me
Devmom: you should be thank full to us but you are shouting at us
Maan: i don't want any one to interfere in my life .
Rahul : you know you got married to a girl who is suffering from brain tumor
Maan: for your kind information i know that.. he wrap his arm around his chest
Geet: what ?
Maan: looked at her .. "i knew she is sick , still i married her because life & death is in lord hand. may be the person who is sick life span is longer than a mine & your's ... "pointed at Rahul
Devmom: pagal ha yeh larka
Maan: yes i am he turn to Geet.
Geet: what is this ?
Maan: try to hold her by her shoulder ..." i will explain you everything"
Geet: don't touch me
Maan: you listen me first
Geet: ran down to car
Maan: ran behind her "Geet listen to me"
Geet: "why i return home yesterday?"
Maan: grab her hand
Geet: leave me Maan
Maan: i will not till you listen to me
Geet: you again...started crying
Maan: pull her back " Geet "
Geet: are you a ..stop
Maan: you sit in car i will tell you all .. he made her sit in car
Geet: why again
At temple
Devmom: Meera your brother had insulted us
Meera:i don't think so
nt: bhabi it is enough first of all we were trying to save his life but he in return insulted us in front of everyone
Dadi: beta he is short temper
Devmom: he should know how to talk to elder
Dadi: i am sorry from her side
Devmom : why you are sorry he should be sorry ?
beeji: bacha ha
Devmom: i am going back with my grand children ask your son to come there & say he is sorry ...
Meera: my children will not go with you....
Tanu & Ved tightly hold Meera
Devmom: ok you keep your children , you cant enter my home now ...
Sasha: "what is this?"
Tasha:"i think mama's & didi new drama"
Sasha: if babhi will not come who will look after our home
Tasha:"Uff yes mama bhi josh se kaam karti ha na ka hosh se"
Devmom: are you two coming or not
Sasha & Tasha ran
Dadi: "Meera beta call Dev"
Meera: dadi you don't worry they can't live with out me ..
Beeji: beta call Maan ask him to say sorry to her
Meera: no i will not call him as i had enough of them ..
Dadi: beeji yeh aaj kal ka becha
Beeji: Geet bemar ha
Dadi: lets go home & talk to them
In Car
Maan: yesterday i came to know about your sickness
Geet: when?
Maan: you remember i went somewhere from office
Geet: oh i see that why you were behaving strangely.
Maan: i was shocked & scared myself how to tell you ?
they reached farm house
Geet: why you marry me today ?
Maan: looked at her " if i was sick what you would have done"
Geet: hmmm
Maan: kya tum mujhe se shadi nai karti
Geet: karti
Maan: why ?
Geet: to fight
Maan: i did same i we both will fight & i am sure you will be fine
Geet: but my case is different
Maan: how can you say that?
Geet: you are
Maan: bas ab chup .... they saw Dadi & Meera coming towards their car
Geet: how i will face all?
Maan:i am there they both get down
Dadi: Maan what is all this ?
Maan: kuch nai
Dadi: is that true what Rahul said
Maan: yes
Dadi:Maan
Maan: dadi why you are over reacting
Dadi why you didnot told us ?
Geet try to go inside
Maan: hold her hand " Dadi if i was sick what would be your reaction then"
Dadi: beta
Maan: bus dadi i just want my family support here .. he walk in
Geet : looked at Dadi she was in tears "he just told me i myself .. paused"
Meera: bus Geet , he is right in saying so .
Geet: but shadi
Maan: "Geet you don't think that much "
Tanu: yeh kaise shadi ha everyone has sad face
Meera: yes our bride has to get ready
Geet: why?
Dadi: i have invited few of our close friends
Maan: but i asked you not to
Dadi: Maan i will not listen your everything now ...
Maan: smiled
Dadi: Meera & Beeji take Geet with you
Maan: where ?
Meera: away from you
Maan: but why? hold her hand
Beeji: pull Maan ear , "meet your bride later "
Maan: "not fair "
Ved: clap his hand Beeji squeezed Mamoo ears
Meera was about to take her in house
Maan: didi aik baat karna da
Meera: not allowed wave him hand
Maan: stairs Ved ,Tanu help me "
Tanu: we will think on it
to be cont sorry for delay i was not feeling well.. i hope you all are happy now as they are married ..sorry for
silly mistakes
originally posted at
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1544465&TPN=39
Maan: nothing i think he is drunk .. pull her to walk
Geet: let me talk to him first... she try to stop him
Maan: first you complete rituals .. he pull her with him & walk around fire
Devmom: loudly " world is filled with girls why you are marrying to a sick girl Maan"
Beeji : i think you are mistaken
Devmom: why i will spread a fake news
Geet: Maan stop this she stop...he try to make her walk but she didn't move..
nt: to sasha " she will walk away"
Dadi: Geet beta complete it
Geet: i will not
Maan: suddenly picked her up & took the last round" i will not stop"
Meera: smiled
Geet: this is not fair
Maan: everything is fair in love & war
priest : you are now husband & wife
Devmom: with a open mouth stand still.
Geet: please let me stand
Maan: no you will again try to run.. he held her more tight
Geet: let me talk to him why he said i am sick?
Maan: that is all a melodrama
Geet: no it was not as your face was pale at that time
Maan: will you stop this .. he said bit loud
Geet: you let me stand..
Maan: made her stand ..
both took Dadi's blessing
Dadi: hug them back
Maan: dadi i am coming ..he walk to rahul
Geet was about to go behind him but Meera & beeji stop her
Meera: i am sorry geet i don't know why my in laws created scene.. she hug her
Geet: didi i am sick
Meera: don't say like that
Geet: Didi Maan face told me i am
Meera: did notice her self .."Geet you are not"
they both heard Maan shouting
Geet: quickly ran to them
Maan: it is my life who are you to say all that
Rahul: i was trying to save you
Maan: no need to save me
Devmom: you should be thank full to us but you are shouting at us
Maan: i don't want any one to interfere in my life .
Rahul : you know you got married to a girl who is suffering from brain tumor
Maan: for your kind information i know that.. he wrap his arm around his chest
Geet: what ?
Maan: looked at her .. "i knew she is sick , still i married her because life & death is in lord hand. may be the person who is sick life span is longer than a mine & your's ... "pointed at Rahul
Devmom: pagal ha yeh larka
Maan: yes i am he turn to Geet.
Geet: what is this ?
Maan: try to hold her by her shoulder ..." i will explain you everything"
Geet: don't touch me
Maan: you listen me first
Geet: ran down to car
Maan: ran behind her "Geet listen to me"
Geet: "why i return home yesterday?"
Maan: grab her hand
Geet: leave me Maan
Maan: i will not till you listen to me
Geet: you again...started crying
Maan: pull her back " Geet "
Geet: are you a ..stop
Maan: you sit in car i will tell you all .. he made her sit in car
Geet: why again
At temple
Devmom: Meera your brother had insulted us
Meera:i don't think so
nt: bhabi it is enough first of all we were trying to save his life but he in return insulted us in front of everyone
Dadi: beta he is short temper
Devmom: he should know how to talk to elder
Dadi: i am sorry from her side
Devmom : why you are sorry he should be sorry ?
beeji: bacha ha
Devmom: i am going back with my grand children ask your son to come there & say he is sorry ...
Meera: my children will not go with you....
Tanu & Ved tightly hold Meera
Devmom: ok you keep your children , you cant enter my home now ...
Sasha: "what is this?"
Tasha:"i think mama's & didi new drama"
Sasha: if babhi will not come who will look after our home
Tasha:"Uff yes mama bhi josh se kaam karti ha na ka hosh se"
Devmom: are you two coming or not
Sasha & Tasha ran
Dadi: "Meera beta call Dev"
Meera: dadi you don't worry they can't live with out me ..
Beeji: beta call Maan ask him to say sorry to her
Meera: no i will not call him as i had enough of them ..
Dadi: beeji yeh aaj kal ka becha
Beeji: Geet bemar ha
Dadi: lets go home & talk to them
In Car
Maan: yesterday i came to know about your sickness
Geet: when?
Maan: you remember i went somewhere from office
Geet: oh i see that why you were behaving strangely.
Maan: i was shocked & scared myself how to tell you ?
they reached farm house
Geet: why you marry me today ?
Maan: looked at her " if i was sick what you would have done"
Geet: hmmm
Maan: kya tum mujhe se shadi nai karti
Geet: karti
Maan: why ?
Geet: to fight
Maan: i did same i we both will fight & i am sure you will be fine
Geet: but my case is different
Maan: how can you say that?
Geet: you are
Maan: bas ab chup .... they saw Dadi & Meera coming towards their car
Geet: how i will face all?
Maan:i am there they both get down
Dadi: Maan what is all this ?
Maan: kuch nai
Dadi: is that true what Rahul said
Maan: yes
Dadi:Maan
Maan: dadi why you are over reacting
Dadi why you didnot told us ?
Geet try to go inside
Maan: hold her hand " Dadi if i was sick what would be your reaction then"
Dadi: beta
Maan: bus dadi i just want my family support here .. he walk in
Geet : looked at Dadi she was in tears "he just told me i myself .. paused"
Meera: bus Geet , he is right in saying so .
Geet: but shadi
Maan: "Geet you don't think that much "
Tanu: yeh kaise shadi ha everyone has sad face
Meera: yes our bride has to get ready
Geet: why?
Dadi: i have invited few of our close friends
Maan: but i asked you not to
Dadi: Maan i will not listen your everything now ...
Maan: smiled
Dadi: Meera & Beeji take Geet with you
Maan: where ?
Meera: away from you
Maan: but why? hold her hand
Beeji: pull Maan ear , "meet your bride later "
Maan: "not fair "
Ved: clap his hand Beeji squeezed Mamoo ears
Meera was about to take her in house
Maan: didi aik baat karna da
Meera: not allowed wave him hand
Maan: stairs Ved ,Tanu help me "
Tanu: we will think on it
to be cont sorry for delay i was not feeling well.. i hope you all are happy now as they are married ..sorry for
silly mistakes
originally posted at
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1544465&TPN=39
Labels:
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Meera: oh i saw at tv the news people saw that
Geet: cried i ruin Maan sir life
Meera: why you are sitting here
Geet: i dont have a place to live
Meera :if you dont mind come with me.i live alone
Geet: per woh
Meera : i am a stranger but some time stranger are more then everyone
geet: recollected maan in HP..
bg music
aaj dil dukha hai ( how he safe her from drowning)tum yaad aaye...maan saw a girl sitting near the lake (as the had shown him in jungle) murmurer Geet
Meera: took her to her home "this is your room "
anjanay loog hain
Geet: remembered how they had fight when she stared living in outhouse
apnay kahan dhoond payein (maan cutting wood he cut his hand remind him of geet ..
imagine her "oh your hand is cut let me see she grab it tight and clear it with her duppata" tore herduppata nad wrap it on it..he smiled looking at her try to remove her curls she vanished ..he punch more hard "i will find you Geet"
Meera : here is your blanket . please rest we will talk in morning and find a solution .
Geet: hold the blanket remind of Maan how they had fight on blanket..she try to settel her self in bed...totally restless sometime she pull blanket up , some time hit the pillow
jagay hain sooye nahin" maan voice echo in her ears "mera din tum see sharo tum pe khtam" Geet cried Baji help me..hug the pillow
aisi hai yeh meri baichaini (maan try to sleep but her thought again and again he stared at moon..
both at same time thought when he propose ...)
next morning they woke up at here place.
Maan: i will find her today placed his hand on taveeze ..drove back to city
Geet: prayed please i want to meet him once before i leave this place..
Meera: may i come in ..
Geet yes aw her coming with her breakfast
Meera: you relax today dont go any where this is your home ...i have some work i will catch you in evening...she left her alone
meera called dev "i want to meet you at once"
DEv: ok meet you at 12
Meera:i asked you soon
DEV: baat kya ha
Meera you meet me out side i am waiting
Dev: ok coming he quickly walk out
Nt: dev dev as she came out of washroom saw him no where around "yeh dev kahan chala gai"
NT:dadi aap na Dev ko dekah ha
DAdi yes he is gong with meera.
NT: first Geet now Meera yeh dev bhi na
Maan: walk in..he heard Geet name.."dadi kya geet aaya thi"
before dadi could speak NT replied
NT: haan veerji hum na iss ko dhaka maaar kar nikal diya ..gave a cunning smile
Maan: grab her from her arm "how dare you?"
Dadi: "maan aap aab bhi"
Maan: haan dadi mine aap bhi..NT i willnot let you play with my life again...Push her to sofa..
Nt got scared from his anger
Maan: i am going to find her
Dadi: she is not a nice girl Maan...nt open my eyes
Maan: is nt a nice girl dadi...what she told you ? if she had told you about her past i already know that
.Geet had never hide a single thing from me...
nt: phir bhi aap iss se
Maan: it is none of your business... he walked out
dev: why you called me
Meera: dev i found Geet
Dev: how is she ?
Meera very upset lets find Maan & tell him truth.
Dev: yes lets find him as without out telling him i will never be in peace,
Meera : what you will do of nt?
Dev: you don't worry i will sort her out.
maan went to pinky home
Pinky: oh sir aap
Maan: is geet here?
Pinky:no sir
Maan: if you get anything about her do tell me at once
Pinky dad : oh Maan sir aap
Maan: hi
P dad: beta i want to talk to you come in
Maan: jee
Pdad: beta you go and make tea..
Pinky : jee
P dad: beta geet had a past i think she was notable to tell you
Maan" Uncle i know about it
P dad: do you know that she is expecting
Maan: yes i know ..we both made this relation on truth
Pdad: oh puttar then it must be her family or that guy
Maan: jee uncle she wanted to tell me something but i didnot get her at that time..
Pinky:sir coffee
Maan: thx pinky do you remember when i was talking with you both she wanted to say something..
pinky: yes sir ..
ADi: hi sir aap yahan
Maan : hi any news
Adi :sir i check every station and bus stand she had not left Delhi
Maan: then she must be in city lets find her
Adi: yes sir lets find her
Maan: i hope she is if in this state she should not be alone. lets check hospital
Pinky dad: beta acha socho acha ho ga ... be positive
Maan: jee..he drove like crazy on road ..check all the possible places.
dev :reach home NT
Nt where were you ?
DEv: why should i tell you?
NT: i am your wife
DEV: you were once?
NT: you were with meera?
DEV:with who ever i am it is not your head ache
NT: first Geet mow Meera i will kill both of them
Dev: i have pity on you NT ,you will never ....paused
NT: Veerji came he was searching for Geet. you are searching For Geet what is in that Geet which you dont have.
DEV: bro back
NT: reply me what is in that Geet
DEV: everything
Nt: you cannot go like that
DEV i will stop me if you can
Meera reach home saw Geet sitting
Meera: how are you?
Geet: i am fine?reading newspaper
Meera; what are you doing ?
Geet: i am search for a job out of Delhi
Meera: why?
Geet; i cannot stay in this city now my love will make me weak everytime
Meera: when you love him why dont you tell him?
Geet: i went there to tell him but he was not at home
Meera: for how long he will stay away he will for sure come back.. hug her
Geet: hug her back ..
Meera: oh you have fever
Geet: yes i thora se ha
Meera:let me take you to dr
Geet: no plz i all be fine
Meera: please
Geet: no i dont want to go out plz
Meera ok you rest
it was evening my was roaming like crazy he saw a girl with same height and same kind of clothes
Maan: stop car and shouted "GEET"
that girl turn back
shamain ab dhalti nahin
anchal jo tera simat jaye
Maan; sorry..his phone rang
DEV: bro where are you
Maan: why?
DEV: i found Geet
MAan: where is she
DEV: she is at Meera home
Maan: ok i am coming
DEv: bro but you have to met me first before meeting her
Maan: what is there DEV:
DEV: a bitter truth
Maan: ok meet me out side meera home
DEV: ok
at meera home
Geet was trying to sleep but his thought was again and bothering her
aap yahan hamesha rahein (geet maan aap tou mera dil mein ha aap muhje se aik baar
zaroo mila ga ..i will tell you the truth)
duuri rahay na houn faslay(maan;geet see i found you ..you are just mine)
maan: reached Meera home dev was waiting for him
Maan: yes tell the what is the problem
dev: prob Geet was my wife
Maan: what?
Dev: yes i betray her
Maan; grab his collar how dare you
Dev: bro fro money
Maan: why didnot you asked form me ,you ruin a girl life
Dev: bro punish me but dont leave her she loves you alot
Maan: oh you were the cause
Dev: yes i asked her is my hatred more for you or Bro love
Maan: you harted:
Dev: no bro your love as she came back to home but NT
Maan: oh that why nt so against Geet
Dev: yes
Meera: why you both are standing out...as she heard their voices
Maan: where is Geet
Meera: she is having fever i gave her medicine.
Maan: can i see her
Meera: yes
Maan: i will talk to you later...
DEv: bro i am here where i will go.
Maan: quickly walk in the room
Geet was just lying with close eyes .. i am feeling as if you are very near to me
Maan:walked in heard what she said
Geet: meera as it was very dark n room
Maan: no me
Geet: aap
Maan: ha mein
Geet: how you find me?
Maan: bas i did?
she sit
Maan keep lying you are sick
Geet: ab nahi
Maan:why you didnot told me that guy was dev he sit next to her
GeeT:i wanted to tell you but you said he is very imp to you i didnot wanted to hurt you.
Maan: what you think i am not hurt now?
Geet: hmm
Maan: Geet i always took side of truth how would i?
Geet: woh mein
MAan: chup .. tears roll down their eyes
Geet; i came back but you were not there.
Maan: placed his finger at her lips .. jo hogaya wo hogaya ab bas..Geet is only Maaan's
Geet :Maan is only Geet's
..hug her tightly and ki*** her
ab agar tum milay to
itna yaqeen hai
hans deinge hum to
roona nahin hai ......
the end
originally posted at http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1505221
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Alone in Paradise chapter 6
Geet: i think he is crazy.. he called me & now saying he has to attend a meeting
Adi oh you are going
Geet: yes
Adi: bit confused him self as he had never seen Maan such attitude
Geet: in anger walk out
Maan: who was looking from his room smiled ... " you always have anger on you nose " smiled
Geet : sit in car "lets go"
Driver: Sir said he is coming ...
Geet: what?
Driver: Maan sir is coming
Geet: ok she sat..
After 10 min Maan came
Maan: drop her first
Geet: ignore him as if she didn't care.
Maan: hide his smiled looked at her who was playing with her duppata .
Geet: could feel he is looking at her ..
Maan: if you dont mind will you tell me about your self ..
Geet: looked at him..
Maan: pointed at flowers ...
Geet: started at him
Maan: ok ok dont tell you can keep it a secret
Geet: there is nothing to keep.
Maan: when you have trust in me you can tell me may be i help you?
Geet: open window about to throw flowers out side
Maan: grab her hand .. "what is flowers fault?"
Geet: looked at him her hand was still in his .
Maan: "soon you will love the sender"
Geet:" i will not"
Maan: smell the flowers "smell these flower said to me "
Geet; you are impossible .. pull her hand out of his
they reached home
Geet; quickly get down
Maan: dont throw it
Geet: "if you like them that mush why dont you keep"
Maan: " it was not given to me i am not that lucky" he asked the driver to go
Geet: he is simple irritating. she walk in
Dadi: beta you are back
Geet: yes
Dadi: what happen you look bit angry?
Geet: nothing
Dadi: wow what a beautiful flowers ?
Geet: felt shy
Dadi: you can keep in our room.
Geet: walk to room " if i find that guy i will really kill him " put the flowers in vase ...walked out
In Afternoon
nakul: call for you
Geet: for me
nakul: yes
Geet: hello
Maan: i can't come will you take interview
Geet: but
Maan: see you
Geet: wait
Maan: yes
Geet: did you had lunch? shyly asked
Maan: hmmm
Geet: means "no"
Maan: i will have ...cut the call
Dadi: what happen beta?
Geet: he is not coming
Dadi: why you are so worried?
Geet: didn't reply
Dadi: what happen at office?
Geet: he has to go in a meeting he didnot talk to me
Dadi: hmmmm
Geet: " i can't say no to a needy lady as i know how difficult it is to search a job"
Dadi: ok i will take.. Dadi asked nakul to send nurses ..she selected a middle age woman as her nurse.
as ( suggest her name)
Geet: thank you
Dadi: smiled " give me a smile"
Geet: smiled.. my work finish
Dadi: no ,now stay here like my daughter
Geet: how?
Dadi: like Maan
Geet: but he is your grandson
Dadi: same way you are my grand daughter
Geet: but
Dadi:no if & but , go freshen up we will have evening tea together
Geet: walked to room "am i in a paradise , why she is giving me such vip treatment ?"
at office
Maan was busy nt called
Maan: how you called me?
nt: i can't call you
Maan: you can, do you need money to buy some stylish clothes
nt: why you think like that?
Maan: you always call when you need some thing
nt: Maan
Maan: ok tell me why you called?
nt: who was that lady who scold us last night?
Maan: hmmm think for a while "My cousin"
nt: your cousin
Maan: yes any problem
nt: but she looked so old fashion.
Maan: bit angry "why old fashion?"
nt: "she wore simple shalwar kameez "
Maan: so what?.... recollected Geet simple dressing
nt: how she can be your cousin?
Maan: i am busy i will talk to you later...
nt: why dont you bring your so call cousin in new year party?
Maan: i will ask her if she will like to come i will for sure bring her with me.
nt: she will not come.
Maan: nt cut the call.... "why i am getting angry "he looked at his wrist watch. "oh it is 8 i better go home "
he gather his files and walked out .
while driving back home he saw that flower boy
Maan: hello
Boy ran to his car
Maan: did she came?
Boy : yes
Maan: i found her address you daily drop here ... he gave him address.
Boy: ok sir
Maan: smiled ... drive home "ab maaza aai ga "
as he enter he heard dadi laughing
Maan: walk to the hall saw dadi sitting with Geet but watching Tv & laughing..... he cleared his throat
Dadi: Maan
Geet: quickly got up she almost bang into him
Maan: what is so funny dadi?
Dadi: Geet was doing mimicry ..
Maan: oh really let me too see
Geet: no way whisper walk out
Dadi: beta she is shy
Maan: did she took interview ?
Dadi: yes
Maan: ok Dadi i will come then we will have dinner together
Dadi: ok beta
After ten mins Maan came in dadi room
Maan: dadi i am so hungry
Dadi: beta dinner is ready
Maan: grab his plate "what only we both will have?"
Dadi: i will ask her wait she called Geet
Geet: from out side "dadi i am not hungry i will have later"
Dadi: beta you come here
Geet: unwontedly walk in
Dadi: come here she ask her to sit next to her she has no choice seated
Maan: "eat or i will have ache" as he notice she was looking at him.
Dadi: Maan
Maan: smiled
Dadi: "beta open your mouth "she started feeding her.. put a spoon of rice in her mouth
Maan:"dadi cheating feed me too" he too seated on other side of bed.
Dadi: ok fast Geet then Maan...
Geet: "i will eat "was about to get up Maan kept his hand on her duppata
Dadi: beta you don't like me .. paused
Geet: i felt you will get tired
Dadi: i will not... she made both of them eat...after the finish
Maan: what beautiful flowers Dadi
Geet: try to pull her duppata out
Dadi: yes it is fir Geet
Maan: ahan..
Geet: looked at him in anger
Maan: dadi will you go with me on new year eve
Dadi: me
Maan: yes
Dadi: are you ok Maan?
Maan: couples are allowed dadi what to do?
Dadi: take Geet with you
Geet: me
Maan: oh i am glad you are ready he hug her
Geet: but.. push him away
Maan: you solved my problem thx thx ...
Geet: i didn't said yes
Maan: you didn't said no either
Dadi: beta as your job go with him
Geet: job
Dadi: yes my spy on him
Maan: oh dadi you have changed her job
Dadi: yes
Maan: then i am not taking her with me
Geet: but i am coming with you whether you take me or not..
Dadi: winked at Maan
Maan: ok Dadi spy ...
Geet: yes i am Dadi Spy walked out
Maan: smiled
Dadi: why you tease her?
Maan: pata nai
Dadi: she is a decent girl
Maan : yes she is ..
Dadi: hmmmm
Maan: dadi.. maan was looking at Geet who was talking to dadi 's nurse
Dadi:don't ever hurt her she is very sensitive .
Maan: sure... hug her ... walk out of room
Geet: looked at him
Maan: be ready spy tomorrow ...
Geet: i will be
Maan: Good night
Geet: Good night
to be cont.. i hope you like this story line... i read each & every comment so don't forget to leave your comments
In advance Merry Christmas to my readers of Alone in Paradise do remember me .. love you all
Originally posted at http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1537129&TPN=53
Adi oh you are going
Geet: yes
Adi: bit confused him self as he had never seen Maan such attitude
Geet: in anger walk out
Maan: who was looking from his room smiled ... " you always have anger on you nose " smiled
Geet : sit in car "lets go"
Driver: Sir said he is coming ...
Geet: what?
Driver: Maan sir is coming
Geet: ok she sat..
After 10 min Maan came
Maan: drop her first
Geet: ignore him as if she didn't care.
Maan: hide his smiled looked at her who was playing with her duppata .
Geet: could feel he is looking at her ..
Maan: if you dont mind will you tell me about your self ..
Geet: looked at him..
Maan: pointed at flowers ...
Geet: started at him
Maan: ok ok dont tell you can keep it a secret
Geet: there is nothing to keep.
Maan: when you have trust in me you can tell me may be i help you?
Geet: open window about to throw flowers out side
Maan: grab her hand .. "what is flowers fault?"
Geet: looked at him her hand was still in his .
Maan: "soon you will love the sender"
Geet:" i will not"
Maan: smell the flowers "smell these flower said to me "
Geet; you are impossible .. pull her hand out of his
they reached home
Geet; quickly get down
Maan: dont throw it
Geet: "if you like them that mush why dont you keep"
Maan: " it was not given to me i am not that lucky" he asked the driver to go
Geet: he is simple irritating. she walk in
Dadi: beta you are back
Geet: yes
Dadi: what happen you look bit angry?
Geet: nothing
Dadi: wow what a beautiful flowers ?
Geet: felt shy
Dadi: you can keep in our room.
Geet: walk to room " if i find that guy i will really kill him " put the flowers in vase ...walked out
In Afternoon
nakul: call for you
Geet: for me
nakul: yes
Geet: hello
Maan: i can't come will you take interview
Geet: but
Maan: see you
Geet: wait
Maan: yes
Geet: did you had lunch? shyly asked
Maan: hmmm
Geet: means "no"
Maan: i will have ...cut the call
Dadi: what happen beta?
Geet: he is not coming
Dadi: why you are so worried?
Geet: didn't reply
Dadi: what happen at office?
Geet: he has to go in a meeting he didnot talk to me
Dadi: hmmmm
Geet: " i can't say no to a needy lady as i know how difficult it is to search a job"
Dadi: ok i will take.. Dadi asked nakul to send nurses ..she selected a middle age woman as her nurse.
as ( suggest her name)Geet: thank you
Dadi: smiled " give me a smile"
Geet: smiled.. my work finish
Dadi: no ,now stay here like my daughter
Geet: how?
Dadi: like Maan
Geet: but he is your grandson
Dadi: same way you are my grand daughter
Geet: but
Dadi:no if & but , go freshen up we will have evening tea together
Geet: walked to room "am i in a paradise , why she is giving me such vip treatment ?"
at office
Maan was busy nt called
Maan: how you called me?
nt: i can't call you
Maan: you can, do you need money to buy some stylish clothes
nt: why you think like that?
Maan: you always call when you need some thing
nt: Maan
Maan: ok tell me why you called?
nt: who was that lady who scold us last night?
Maan: hmmm think for a while "My cousin"
nt: your cousin
Maan: yes any problem
nt: but she looked so old fashion.
Maan: bit angry "why old fashion?"
nt: "she wore simple shalwar kameez "
Maan: so what?.... recollected Geet simple dressing
nt: how she can be your cousin?
Maan: i am busy i will talk to you later...
nt: why dont you bring your so call cousin in new year party?
Maan: i will ask her if she will like to come i will for sure bring her with me.
nt: she will not come.
Maan: nt cut the call.... "why i am getting angry "he looked at his wrist watch. "oh it is 8 i better go home "
he gather his files and walked out .
while driving back home he saw that flower boy
Maan: hello
Boy ran to his car
Maan: did she came?
Boy : yes
Maan: i found her address you daily drop here ... he gave him address.
Boy: ok sir
Maan: smiled ... drive home "ab maaza aai ga "
as he enter he heard dadi laughing
Maan: walk to the hall saw dadi sitting with Geet but watching Tv & laughing..... he cleared his throat
Dadi: Maan
Geet: quickly got up she almost bang into him
Maan: what is so funny dadi?
Dadi: Geet was doing mimicry ..
Maan: oh really let me too see
Geet: no way whisper walk out
Dadi: beta she is shy
Maan: did she took interview ?
Dadi: yes
Maan: ok Dadi i will come then we will have dinner together
Dadi: ok beta
After ten mins Maan came in dadi room
Maan: dadi i am so hungry
Dadi: beta dinner is ready
Maan: grab his plate "what only we both will have?"
Dadi: i will ask her wait she called Geet
Geet: from out side "dadi i am not hungry i will have later"
Dadi: beta you come here
Geet: unwontedly walk in
Dadi: come here she ask her to sit next to her she has no choice seated
Maan: "eat or i will have ache" as he notice she was looking at him.
Dadi: Maan
Maan: smiled
Dadi: "beta open your mouth "she started feeding her.. put a spoon of rice in her mouth
Maan:"dadi cheating feed me too" he too seated on other side of bed.
Dadi: ok fast Geet then Maan...
Geet: "i will eat "was about to get up Maan kept his hand on her duppata
Dadi: beta you don't like me .. paused
Geet: i felt you will get tired
Dadi: i will not... she made both of them eat...after the finish
Maan: what beautiful flowers Dadi
Geet: try to pull her duppata out
Dadi: yes it is fir Geet
Maan: ahan..
Geet: looked at him in anger
Maan: dadi will you go with me on new year eve
Dadi: me
Maan: yes
Dadi: are you ok Maan?
Maan: couples are allowed dadi what to do?
Dadi: take Geet with you
Geet: me
Maan: oh i am glad you are ready he hug her
Geet: but.. push him away
Maan: you solved my problem thx thx ...
Geet: i didn't said yes
Maan: you didn't said no either
Dadi: beta as your job go with him
Geet: job
Dadi: yes my spy on him
Maan: oh dadi you have changed her job
Dadi: yes
Maan: then i am not taking her with me
Geet: but i am coming with you whether you take me or not..
Dadi: winked at Maan
Maan: ok Dadi spy ...
Geet: yes i am Dadi Spy walked out
Maan: smiled
Dadi: why you tease her?
Maan: pata nai
Dadi: she is a decent girl
Maan : yes she is ..
Dadi: hmmmm
Maan: dadi.. maan was looking at Geet who was talking to dadi 's nurse
Dadi:don't ever hurt her she is very sensitive .
Maan: sure... hug her ... walk out of room
Geet: looked at him
Maan: be ready spy tomorrow ...
Geet: i will be
Maan: Good night
Geet: Good night
to be cont.. i hope you like this story line... i read each & every comment so don't forget to leave your comments
In advance Merry Christmas to my readers of Alone in Paradise do remember me .. love you all
Originally posted at http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1537129&TPN=53
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despair chapter 25
loud bell made them awake next morning
Maan: hello ...
Geet: looked at him she feel shy try to move away ..
Maan: hold her hand" jee Meera didi "
Meera: where are you? have you started
Maan: looked at time it was 8 ..."we are ... "
Meera: are your driving?
Maan: looked at Geet: made a baby face to ask her to help
Geet: smiled & thumb down
Maan: didi call you in 15 mins...
Geet: try to free her self
Maan: let me show you my love or you will again get silly thoughts of yours
Geet: felt embraced pull blanket on her
Maan: you have just 10 mins ... we both are late he pull the blanket
Geet: Maan
Maan: tickle her i hope you will not leave
Geet: smiled he kissed her cheek ..
Maan: gave her his hand quickly Mrs ... he took his clothes & walk to the other room...
Geet: shyly smiled quickly freshen up
Maan: looked at her as she came out ...smiled
Geet: why are you smiling
Maan: is there any prob ..walk to her
Geet: what?walked back
Maan: open cupboard
Geet: try to pass he hold her hand.."kya"
Maan: didi asked you to wear saree
Geet: she didnot ask me
Maan: she said to me
Geet; but i dont know how to carry in that
Maan mein hoon na.. you quickly change
Geet: got the saari from cupboard & walk to changing room.. she managed to wear..
Maan: please be quick
Geet: coming .. she peep out of door
Maan was sitting waiting for her to come out..
Geet: hold her saari while walking
Maan: stunning
Geet: chala
Maan: yes he offer his arm
Geet: hold it with out thinking
Maan: you are looking perfect today.
Geet: smiled ..
Maan: nakul did you keep break fast in car
nakul: yes
Maan: lets go madam
Geet: sit next to him...
Maan: to have someone beautiful next to you make your journey more exciting
Geet: are you buttering?
Maan: who was driving..."oh y lord this lady thinks i am buttering...she does not understand my feeling"
Geet: sorry i didnt mean to hurt you..
Maan: smiled please dont start crying i was just teasing you..
Geet: i am not that fool..
Maan: really...then what happen to you last night?
Geet: aap
Maan: ok ok
At farm house
Meera: Dadi all arrangement done
Dadi: bless you beta
Dev mom: what kind of shadi it is
Dadi: a simple & unique
nT: but aunty there is no special guest
Dadi: i don't any more drama
Beeji : beta it is just a for blessing
Sasha:no sangeet
Beeji: beta few days back her father die...
Dev mom: i really don't understand this
Dadi : please you all dont take tension you arrange tonight.
Meera: please lets make this occasion special...
Tasha : when they will come?
Meera : i just called Maan said in 20 min they will reach here.
Rahul : bhabi where is mom
Sasha she has gone in side with nt..
Rahul: walk in
Meera: Dadi lets go to worship place..i will call Maan there.
Sasha : bhabi we are coming....
Meera taken Dadi ,beeji & her kids ...
nt: i don't want to attend the wedding
devmom: beta we have to
Rahul: di chalo you will see a great drama there
devmom: what do you mean?
Rahul: geet uncle called
nt: can't you tell quickly
Rahul: first you get ready ...
devmom : bolo
Rahul i will tell there you quickly come...
Meera : called Maan
Maan: didi just 5 mins drive
Meera: you come at mandir
Maan: abhi
Meera: yes we are here
Maan: ok
Geet: what happen
Maan: everyone has gone to worship they are calling us too
Geet: ufff my dress.. she try to cover her head
Maan: what happen it is beautiful?
Geet: yes very beautiful , what dadi will say she is change in 24 hours
Maan: yes you are
Geet: Maan
Maan: see you have started shouting at me.
Geet oops
Maan: did i said wrong
Geet: no
they reached
Maan: it look like someone is getting married here
Geet: yes
Maan:let go.. he offer his arm
Meera: bus bus .. dhula your job done .. she came from behind with beejee hold Geet
Maan: what is this
Beejee: shadi
Maan: whose ?
Tanu: meri or ved ki
Maan: Tanu
VED: your & didi...
Dadi: come up
Geet: looked at Maan
Meera: "wah Geet you are totally change she cover her with big red dupatta ..." she could hardly see
Geet: jee
Meera: jeee
Maan: didi
they reached up
Dadi: beta it was my wish i see your wedding rituals
Maan: dadi why you didnot told me
Meera: you would have said baad mein
Dadi: bus today you get married were your parents got married..
Maan: as you wish
the priest recite....
Dadi: Meera make them sit
Maan and Geet sit next to each other ...
Priest ask them to rise
Rahul: Maan bhai wait wait.. as they were about to take round
Dadi: "what is your problem"
DevMom: stop this shadi
Maan: bit angry , he took first round
Rahul: bhabi stop it
Meera:problem kya ha
DevMom: if i tell you all you will not trust me.. she whisper something in Meera ears..
Maan & Geet took second round..
Meera looked at Maan.. "she was trying to read his face as his face was bit pale
Geet: we should listen them as she was not able to see
Maan: hold her hand more tight.. "You just listen me & follow me if you love me.."
they took third round..
Devmom: stop it
Meera; was in shock tears were flowing from her eyes...
Maan: got she had come to know about Geet illness... Maan with finger ask her to stay quiet
they took forth round
Rahul: on top of his voice "Maan you are marrying a sick girl"
their fifth round came to an end
Geet stop..."what?"
DEV mom : she has Tumor
to be cont....
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Maan: hello ...
Geet: looked at him she feel shy try to move away ..
Maan: hold her hand" jee Meera didi "
Meera: where are you? have you started
Maan: looked at time it was 8 ..."we are ... "
Meera: are your driving?
Maan: looked at Geet: made a baby face to ask her to help
Geet: smiled & thumb down
Maan: didi call you in 15 mins...
Geet: try to free her self
Maan: let me show you my love or you will again get silly thoughts of yours
Geet: felt embraced pull blanket on her
Maan: you have just 10 mins ... we both are late he pull the blanket
Geet: Maan
Maan: tickle her i hope you will not leave
Geet: smiled he kissed her cheek ..
Maan: gave her his hand quickly Mrs ... he took his clothes & walk to the other room...
Geet: shyly smiled quickly freshen up
Maan: looked at her as she came out ...smiled
Geet: why are you smiling
Maan: is there any prob ..walk to her
Geet: what?walked back
Maan: open cupboard
Geet: try to pass he hold her hand.."kya"
Maan: didi asked you to wear saree
Geet: she didnot ask me
Maan: she said to me
Geet; but i dont know how to carry in that
Maan mein hoon na.. you quickly change
Geet: got the saari from cupboard & walk to changing room.. she managed to wear..
Maan: please be quick
Geet: coming .. she peep out of door
Maan was sitting waiting for her to come out..
Geet: hold her saari while walking
Maan: stunning
Geet: chala
Maan: yes he offer his arm
Geet: hold it with out thinking
Maan: you are looking perfect today.
Geet: smiled ..
Maan: nakul did you keep break fast in car
nakul: yes
Maan: lets go madam
Geet: sit next to him...
Maan: to have someone beautiful next to you make your journey more exciting
Geet: are you buttering?
Maan: who was driving..."oh y lord this lady thinks i am buttering...she does not understand my feeling"
Geet: sorry i didnt mean to hurt you..
Maan: smiled please dont start crying i was just teasing you..
Geet: i am not that fool..
Maan: really...then what happen to you last night?
Geet: aap
Maan: ok ok
At farm house
Meera: Dadi all arrangement done
Dadi: bless you beta
Dev mom: what kind of shadi it is
Dadi: a simple & unique
nT: but aunty there is no special guest
Dadi: i don't any more drama
Beeji : beta it is just a for blessing
Sasha:no sangeet
Beeji: beta few days back her father die...
Dev mom: i really don't understand this
Dadi : please you all dont take tension you arrange tonight.
Meera: please lets make this occasion special...
Tasha : when they will come?
Meera : i just called Maan said in 20 min they will reach here.
Rahul : bhabi where is mom
Sasha she has gone in side with nt..
Rahul: walk in
Meera: Dadi lets go to worship place..i will call Maan there.
Sasha : bhabi we are coming....
Meera taken Dadi ,beeji & her kids ...
nt: i don't want to attend the wedding
devmom: beta we have to
Rahul: di chalo you will see a great drama there
devmom: what do you mean?
Rahul: geet uncle called
nt: can't you tell quickly
Rahul: first you get ready ...
devmom : bolo
Rahul i will tell there you quickly come...
Meera : called Maan
Maan: didi just 5 mins drive
Meera: you come at mandir
Maan: abhi
Meera: yes we are here
Maan: ok
Geet: what happen
Maan: everyone has gone to worship they are calling us too
Geet: ufff my dress.. she try to cover her head
Maan: what happen it is beautiful?
Geet: yes very beautiful , what dadi will say she is change in 24 hours
Maan: yes you are
Geet: Maan
Maan: see you have started shouting at me.
Geet oops
Maan: did i said wrong
Geet: no
they reached
Maan: it look like someone is getting married here
Geet: yes
Maan:let go.. he offer his arm
Meera: bus bus .. dhula your job done .. she came from behind with beejee hold Geet
Maan: what is this
Beejee: shadi
Maan: whose ?
Tanu: meri or ved ki
Maan: Tanu
VED: your & didi...
Dadi: come up
Geet: looked at Maan
Meera: "wah Geet you are totally change she cover her with big red dupatta ..." she could hardly see
Geet: jee
Meera: jeee
Maan: didi
they reached up
Dadi: beta it was my wish i see your wedding rituals
Maan: dadi why you didnot told me
Meera: you would have said baad mein
Dadi: bus today you get married were your parents got married..
Maan: as you wish
the priest recite....
Dadi: Meera make them sit
Maan and Geet sit next to each other ...
Priest ask them to rise
Rahul: Maan bhai wait wait.. as they were about to take round
Dadi: "what is your problem"
DevMom: stop this shadi
Maan: bit angry , he took first round
Rahul: bhabi stop it
Meera:problem kya ha
DevMom: if i tell you all you will not trust me.. she whisper something in Meera ears..
Maan & Geet took second round..
Meera looked at Maan.. "she was trying to read his face as his face was bit pale
Geet: we should listen them as she was not able to see
Maan: hold her hand more tight.. "You just listen me & follow me if you love me.."
they took third round..
Devmom: stop it
Meera; was in shock tears were flowing from her eyes...
Maan: got she had come to know about Geet illness... Maan with finger ask her to stay quiet
they took forth round
Rahul: on top of his voice "Maan you are marrying a sick girl"
their fifth round came to an end
Geet stop..."what?"
DEV mom : she has Tumor
to be cont....
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Alone in Paradise 5
Early next morning
Dadi: good morning beta
Geet: good morning , why you did not woke me ?
Dadi: why should i wake you?
Geet: feel shy
Dadi: you go and freshen up then help me
Geet: quickly freshen up & help dadi
After some time
Dadi : will you take me to garden ?
Geet: sure she push her wheel chair to garden
Dadi: you carry on beta i give me news paper
Geet : started drying her hairs..
Maan: walked to his room window as he heard some one talking out side saw Geet talking to dadi
both smiling at each other ..suddenly she turn towards his window
Maan : sure i will have a nice day today as i saw the most beautiful girl in world
Geet: felt someone staring at her she saw a shadow moving a side " dadi whose room is this?" pointed towards Maan window
Dadi: My grand son Maan's
Geet: oh
Dadi: what happen?
Geet: i have to apologizes him
Dadi: why?
Geet: last night i scold him & his friends
Dadi: shocked "what you scold him?"
Geet: yes
Dadi: but why?
Geet: they were having party i as not able to sleep..
Dadi: did they listen to you?
Geet: yes
Dadi: kamal hogaya
Geet: what?
Dadi: that they listen to you
Geet: shyly smiled
Maan: nice smile... walk to the dinning room .
nakul: sir breakfast
Maan: where is dadi?
nakul: she is put with her new attendant
Maan: ok you bring my breakfast out side
nakul ok sir
Maan: good morning dadi
Dadi: good morning beta
Geet: quickly got up
Maan: seated "I don't eat people"
Dadi: smiled
Geet: i was just going in as she got he was saying to her.
Maan: i have asked nakul to bring breakfast here
Geet: ok sir you have with Dadi.. walked in
Dadi: she has her own rules
Maan: hmmm what rules ?
Dadi: she said i will not have lunch till my job is finalized
Maan: but i told her she is selected for the job
Dadi: she thought i will select
Maan: dadi she is untrained
Dadi: i know
Maan: i have ask for a proper nurse
Dadi: what about her ?
Maan: ask her to look after home , keep & eye on that nurse
Dadi: smiled as you wish
Maan: started having his breakfast.
Dadi: saw her going in side kitchen." cute girl"
Maan: but she shout like a teacher
Dadi: acha ha someone scold you
Maan: she was so angry for few sec i thought our school principal is standing in front of us.
Dadi: good now you behave
Maan: hug her
Dadi: talk to her when you have time.
Maan: why?
Dadi: she want to say sorry to you.
Maan: hmmmm
Dadi: no mischief you naughty boy
Maan: rub his chin i will think on it.
Dadi: bad boy
Maan: had a laughter "yes i am " kissed her forehead
Dadi: are you going to office ?
Maan: yes he walk in
Geet: suddenly stop as she saw him coming
Maan: passed her
Geet: i want to talk to you
Maan: i don't have time you take appointment from my sectary ..
Geet: what?
Maan: yes looked in her eyes
Geet: lowered her eyes ..
Maan: like it
Geet: looked confused
Maan: today you have to take interview for a nurse
Geet: shocked .." nurse"
Maan: yes a proper one
Geet: what about my job ? tears floated her eyes... she started blinking her eyes quickly ..
Maan: looked her confusion he enjoyed
Geet: what about me ?
Maan: i will think on it later .. they will come at 4 if i am not back you carry on
Geet: i don't know how to take..
Maan: same way you gave yesterday...
Geet:but
Maan: bye he walked out .... teacher i will not leave you like that..
Geet: walk to dadi
Dadi: what happen beta why you are so sad
Geet: sir said he is keeping a nurse for you..
Dadi: got he had said something to her ,"come here"
Geet: yes
Dadi: you will stay with me let him find & keep i will say i don't like her..
Geet: really
Dadi: yes now smile..
Geet: smiled..thanks
Dadi: cup her face you will not leave this home it is my promise.
Maan car stop at same signal ....knocked at his window
flowerboy :sir that madam did not pass this signal today
Maan: she will at 10
flowerboy : how you know?
Maan: you see ...
flowerboy smiled
at office Maan called Adi
Adi: yes sir
Maan: call home & ask miss Geet she has a appointment with me at 10:15
Adi: ok sir
Maan: looked at watch it was 9:35.. he smiled
Adi: called at home
Geet: hello
Adi: are you Geet
Geet: yes
Adi: Maan sir want's you to meet him in his office at 10:15
Geet: what?
Adi: make sure you reach in time
Geet: looked at wall clock it is 9:37 how i will reach at 10:15 ,i have to get a taxi ...
Adi: that is your problem..he closed the call
Geet: picked up her bag
Dadi: what happen?
Geet: Maan sir called me at 10: 15
Dadi: so
Geet: you don't know it takes hour to find a taxi.
Dadi: beta there are cars in home you take one
Geet: but
Dadi: nakul ask driver to drop her to Maan's office
Geet: looked at her
Dadi: go beta you will be late
Geet: i am going see you soon
Dadi: take care
Geet was just sitting in car lost she didnot notice flower boy knocked at her window
Driver: madam
Geet: looked out
flower boy: this is for you he gave her i flowers
Geet: i don't want
Flower boy you have to take it
Geet: why?
flower boy : i am paid for it
Geet: i wish i find that guy
flower boy :tata see you tomorrow waved at her
Geet: i will not come tomorrow she hold the flowers in her hand
Driver: we have reached
Geet: thanks ...
Maan: saw her getting out off car he saw his wrist watch it was 10:05..saw flowers in her hand..smiled
Geet: walked in
Adi: oh you are in time ..
Geet: yes
Adi: you can go
Geet: i think i still have few mins
Adi: yes
Maan was sitting on his chair waiting for her
Geet: may i come in
Maan: yes
Geet: hide flowers under her duppata" i am so silly why i bring it up "
Maan: hide his smile "have a seat"
Geet: thanks
Maan: i have called you here .. wait he called someone & pretend to talk
Geet: looked nervous
Maan: hide his smiled " i think you go home i will talk to you at home i have to attend a meeting"
Geet: in shocked looked at her.
Maan: you can go
Geet: was about to walk out
Maan: i thing someone likes you who daily send you such beautiful flowers
Geet: puzzled .."i "
Maan: i saw you had yesterday ...
Geet: i don't know who he is..
Maan: you should better find him... started working on his laptop
Geet: how to?
Maan: that too i have to tell you
Geet: but how he..paused
Maan: with interested looked at her.
Geet: shyly no one like me.. walked out
Maan: but i like you ... smiled
to be cont .. sorry i am laziest FF writer on earth sorry ..
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