despair 30

thx alot for making my day .... special thanks to  cute-aly for making this post 
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1624519.... me feel so special ..thax alot honey ...my this part is for you ...just to thank you....


Geet: rub his hand .."please Maan aab bahot dair hogai ha mera saabar ko maat aazmaii "
Beejee: pat her shoulder "beta subha hogai ha tum thori daar ka leya ghar chali jao"
Geet: beejee i will not leave him for a sec ..bus aap sub ko bol da.... she again hold his shoulder tight as if he will get up and run away from her ...
Beejee: walk out ... "i dont know how much lord will test her."
Dadi: "nazar lag gai ha "
Beejee: ha . both looked in side the ICU .
Geet:Maan please get up .....see you always say i should listen you ..now you too listen me.get up ..she started shaking him ... Get UP...
nurse : what are you doing madam? are you in your senses... pull her way  from Maan.
Geet: i am asking him for last so many hours but he is not responding ...started crying.....
Dadi: entered room ..beta hug her
Geet; dadi aap bola na utha bahot hogaya .....
Dadi: you pray beta
Geet: i prayed for maa and my sis they left me., i pray for papa he left me ...now i will not pray ..... i will not pray.... he has to get up himself .... he has to listen to me.....
Dadi: couldn't stop she herself started crying.....drag her out of room
Dr:i think you better take her home she is tired and she need rest.....
Geet: i will not go until he is fine ..
Beejee: Geet kya huwa ha tum ko
Geet: kuch nahi ....when every i started living life it snatch my happiness ...... this time i will not let it happen ...
Dadi: Geet ..
Geet: dadi please everyone leave me alone if he is not with me no one will be with me..... she pull herself away from dadi's grab again walk in to ICU....sit next to his bed
Geet: if you are Maan Singh khurana then i am Mrs Maan Singh Khurana more stubborn  are you listening to me.
Maan: hand moved as she placed her head on his shoulder ...
Geet: i will not move a inch until from here.....nor i eat .....suna aap na ..she was whispering and crying ..
Maan: in low voice :Hmmm
Geet: thought it she was pretending that he replied to her ..she move more close to his ear "Maan can you hear me "
Maan: in drowsy voice reply : Hmmm
Geet; dadi dadi ..she shouted ....
Dadi & Dr ran in
Geet: dadi see he replied to me   ..
Dadi: looked at sleeping Maan
Geet: Maan ....
DR: check there was bit sensation in his body.....
Geet: Maan bola na you can hear me .....
Maan:didnot reply
Dr:Mrs Maan  he is still in coma....
Geet; dr am i lying to you i just heard him he said Hmmm
DR: you need rest Mrs Maan .. try to take her out
Geet;i told you i will not move a inch from here..she hold Maan hand tight in her's .. Maan respond he grab her hand ...
Geet; with smile see see see this she should everyone Maan holding her hand she just wave their hand ..."i am not holding his he is holding mine....
Dr and Dadi looked at her ....
Geet: you think i am in shock acting like this.... he is responding to me
DR; smiled sorry.. you sit here.. let me check him again ...
Geet: looked at dadi ..
dadi just kissed her forehead ..."you are right beta"
Geet;dadi he is just playing with us ..he just want o find out how much we love him... kissed his hand
Dadi: your naught husband
Geet; yes very naughty...
Maan was coming back to conscious .he was moving ...
Geet; became more excited .....
Dr: you keep talking to him ..so he will get up....  .Give Geet blessing..
Geet; kya laga Maan ....whisper in his ear ....
Maan:eyes ball was moving
Geet: bola na....
Maan:open his eyes ...."where am i "
Geet:hospital...
Maan: looked at her then looked around.... "why here?"
DR: ask Geet to move aside..he check his eyes ..
Dr: you met an accident ..
Maan:"looked at Geet....as if he was trying to remember..."
dadi walk close to him
Maan:where is Brij?
Geet:who..?
Maan: he try to kill me......he recollected ..
Dr: Mr Maan you rest don't think... he ask nurse to give him injection...
Maan:Geet
Geet; walk to his bed
Maan: try to get up but he couldn't move ..
Geet: why you are getting up tell me ?
Maan: i cannot move...
Geet; looked at Dr
DR: Mr Maan you rest ..you will be fine ,,
Maan: try to move his legs but it was not moving...."see my legs ...i don t have sensation i..."
Geet: shhhh i am there na everything will be fine ....you are just hurt that why she just hug him with out caring everyone is looking at her ...
Maan: hug her back
DR; smiled i thing his wife will cure him not we Dr ......
Dadi: smiled with teary eyes ...
they walked out
Geet: whisper "will you live me everyone is looking at us"
Maan: still you are care of others......not me
Geet; hug him more tightly in her arms ..... "I love you never ever do this to me again i can't stay a single min without you"
Maan: kissed her forehead " love you too"
Geet tears drop ...
Maan: are you crying why i am awake ..wipe away
Geet: marogi
Maan: call Dr ask him why i cannot move ..
Geet: shhhhh..chup we will ask that later .... you just sleep.... made him rest properly....
Maan: halat to dekho apni lagat ha dus saal se ..paused  started at her
Geet: i was scared..... hug him more tightly placed her head on his shoulder........
Maan:just thinking why he can't move his body...... the injection made him drowsy.....both slept

to be cont ..thx alot for your comments & support ...thank you all of you for making my day so special ..love you


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despair 29

hi dear readers i know few of you are very angry for me as again a sad track... dear this was the story line ....please tolerate this track for few days ....  i dont know why i just want to write some thing emotional .or how i feel if the person you love the most in your life is going way from you .... i hope you all will support me ..for those who dont like sad track i will update FF Simply Love the you can read janu manu and coffees ....trust me you will not be disappointed ... pain is part of life ....
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 do listen it while reading you will like it 
Geet: please dadi let me go ..she try to go out ..
Jay: called Dr 
 Dadi: beta they will bring him here 
Geet: i want to see how much he is hurt
Dadi: beta ..he is tough thori se lagi hogi 
Geet; dadi mein jao JAY bhai ka saath
JAY: bhabi you stay here i will go and bring him ....asked Pari to hold her ..and he went out 
Meera: woke up with the noise .... "what happen ?why she is crying ?"
Dadi: beta Maan
Meera: kya huwa Maan ko....
Pari: didi he just fall down from 
Meera: looked at Geet who was trying to remove Pari hand form her arm...
Dadi: just collapse in sofa ....
Meera: " please you both don't worry nothing is going to happen to my brother.... 
Beejee: Geet...she just hold  Geet....
Geet: please ask her to let me go and see him ....
Beejee: looked at Dadi....
Dadi: beta come here. he had fall down from horse before ...just wait and see he will be coming in few minutes ...
Geet: placed her head in dadi's lap ..her tears was flowing badly all over her cheeks.... she recollected few hours back Maan said to her "Geet you know your tears make me weak ...when you cry my heart sink ...he wipe her tears ..." murmur i will not make you weak Maan i am your  strength...... she quickly got up walk to the worship placed and started praying....
Dadi looked at her ...


Romeo ( i hope you guys remember he was brij friend i did introduce him )....ran in Beejee..
Beejee: what are you doing here?
Romeo i will tell you later..JAY Bhai is saying he is taking Maan bhai to hospital you all come with me..
Geet: Romeo how he is?
Romeo: looked at her .... you come with me.
Pari and Meera quickly picked up Tanu and Ved ...they all rush to hospital.....
Geet was just looking out side holding her Maangal suthar .....murmur "why always me?"
Meera: hold her hand ...." our love is strong Geet kuch nahi hoga"
Geet; placed her head on her shoulder....
VED: kya huwa  where are we going?
Beejee: beta your mamoo met an accident
VED:kya woh ma..
Geet: shouted chup  ...pleased her hand on his mouth..
Meera: Ved if you will say any thing now i will slap you.....
VED: was scared :he stared crying 
Geet:just hug him tight.... "sorry beta sorry lets pray for him hold his small hands in her's" 
Dadi: beta please drive fast 
Romeo: i am ...
In half hour time they reached hospital
Geet: ran in with Meera..
JAY :was standing in corridor .
Geet: where is he?
JAY: in side ...he pointed at operation theater ...
Geet: what happen ?
JAY : he slipped while going up to the hill.... and was unconscious. a villager told me they saw his horse coming back towards farm they  went up to search .....
Geet; for how long his is unconscious ?
JAY: 4 to 5 hours...
Geet: murmur i can feel him( as she woke 5 hours back ) ...she walk to the operation theater.... nurse stopped her ....
Nurse: ma you cannot go in
Geet can i sit here ..she sit on floor ...
Nurse looked at her could nt say no
Geet:gave a blank look to everyone 

Dadi: Geet beta be brave..kissed her forehead ..who was sitting on floor 

Geet: again started crying bitterly "today i am feeling lonely......i didnt felt like this when papa died ......"

beejee : sabar beta  sabar ...just pray..

Geet: beejee you know my prayers are never heard .......looked at door

beejee :karo tou .... 

Geet: beejee i can live without my parents but not without him,not a single min .... hide her self in beejee lap.

Dadi:  iss ka leya Maan ko theek kar da...

JAY: please .....he was help less as he was not getting how to stop them from crying..

Dr came out....JAY ran to him ..

JAY: how is he ?

DR: his back bone is damaged & he is still unconscious ..i cannot say anything just pray.

Geet: can i see him please ? she quickly got up... held Dadi hand 

DR: one at a time 

Geet: dadi you go first ....

Dadi: walk in ..he was sleeping in between many machine she could not see him just walk out"i can't see him like that"
Geet: can i go ..looked at Meera 
Meera :yes 
Geet: walked in with heavy heart .... 
nurse had just removed his oxygen mask ...
Geet: can i sit here
nurse :yes you can but dont touch anything.
Geet: walked to bed Maan's words echo in her ears "i will not leave you at any cost kuch bhi hojai" tears roll down her eyes ..."you were right happiness time span is very short". kissed his forehead.

Geet: sit next to his bed "i just came to know how much i am attached with you for the first time you were away from me for more than 5 hours ..hold his hand in hers....I felt like i could not breath.you were right .... she suddenly smiled move more close to him whisper "pata ha i am not sick you were right .your dream of having paused ...can be fulfilled. "she started recollection how Maan said to her " Geet you know i need four kids 2 girls 2 boys so no one is alone . you know my heart say that we will have he brush his his nose tip to hers "

Geet:hide herself in his arms ...."you and your dreams "

Maan:kya dream dekhna mein paaisa lagta ha ... pull her more close. he didnot leave a tiny pace between them.

Geet:"get up Maan you have to make your dream come true" she placed her head on his shoulder .

DR: pat her shoulder :Mrs Maan he cannot hear you 

Geet: he can 

DR: clinical he is ..

Geet:dr please stop it i know he can hear me and you keep your advise to ..paused...

JAY: Bhabi please come with me they will take him for more tests

Geet: bhahi i want to be with him Please

JAY: ok you come with me we will 

Geet: walked with him

DR had his ct scan

Geet: is everything fine.

DR: just wait till he gets up...

Time flies it was 8 at night ...

dadi :Geet beta why dont you go home and freshen up 

Geet:dadi please let me stay with him i am fine here.

Dadi: beta you are sitting like this for last 10 hours .staring at him

Geet: dadi please...... she recollected Maan" Geet when you look at me like this i feel like drown in your eyes , i dont know what is in your eyes .that always pull me towards you ."

Geet : i think you should have a eye test.

Maan:"why ? "tickled her "mera naughty wife'

Geet: really... removed his hand from her bare back.

Maan:"Geet if i die and you whisper in my ear or you will see me like this surly i will get up"

Geet: what are you saying ? hide her self in his chest......

Dadi: beta why are you smiling ?

Geet: dadi he will get up .. she move close to his ear.. whisper" i love you Maan ,love you the most in the whole world ,for me you have to get up "

Dadi :who was holding Maan hand  " Geet he moved "

Geet:Dadi he will as he said ..paused ..where ever he is if i will call him he will come as he my only friend ....right Maan..."

Dadi: kya bol rahi ho beta

Geet: dadi aap nahi samjhe gi yeh meri aur Maan ki love theory ha.... jo pal ha iss ko jeelo ,jo saat ha iss ko enjoy karo baghar kaise daar ka right Maan"she was talking with him as he was listening her ....placed her head on his shoulder closed her eyes

to be cont... do tell me do you like this part or not, dear readers i know this is very emotional but can't help it as this was in my mind ...if i change the story then i might not be able to write... do comment and tell me
thx for your support ....loved each and every comment
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despair 28

Before dawn Geet wake up ..she turn on light the other side of the bed was empty....she quickly got up walk out of room .she search for Maan he was no where..... she walk back to her room wrap a shawal around her self sat on the sofa  next to the window .... recollected what all happen few hours back.
Maan: Geet try to understand me anyone can be sick ...he try to pull her
Geet: Maan i am very sleepy
Maan: but i am not tickle her .... "do you remember last night we made few promises "
Geet: Maan i made promise as i thought i was health , why you want to love a sick ...
Maan: turn her towards him...placed his hand on her lips.."bus chup. why don't you enjoy these moment, kismat walo ko milta ha yeh pal"
Geet: looked at him blink her eyes as his eyes has many question. dreams
Geet: removed  his hand "kya masla ha aap ko jab se meri zindagi mein aai ha sub kuch ulta ho gaya ha..."
Maan: whats wrong with you?what i have done now
Geet: chor kyun nai data aap mujhe ke shayad ......
Maan: raised his hand i will slap you if you say it again, pull her more close .."what do you think is this easy for me to take all this? " he looked in her eyes
Geet: you know because of me Meera didi's married life is in trouble..
Maan: how because of you?
Geet: when i was changing didi called  NT to ask her to convince her mom to come back she took the cell from her and scold her that she always wanted her daughter to marry you, but their dream was shattered as i got married to you .... an orphan & sick girl married to you not to her daughter.
Maan: thinking so
Geet: so kya she said Meera didi that she can stay here as long as she want to as she does not want her any more ..... she started crying..
Maan: oh dont you worry she is a dramabaz ...I will talk to Dev Bhai...
Geet: why i should not worry ? because of me she is suffering her married life is messed up ...if i have not entered your life it would be different... she sat & started crying.
Maan: iss mein rona kai kya baat ha ...he hug her
Geet: i don't know what to do?
Maan: first your relax
Geet: push him away... i asked you not to touch me ..
Maan: Geet i will talk to Dev bhai he will fix this matter.. cup her face
Geet: if he could not  then .... all just because of me ... i am a loser a sick girl.... why don't you marry nt if i die..
Maan: turn on light .."stop it will you  ... you tell me where i am standing you are just blaming your self  why don't you think of me if any thing going to happen to you how i will live ....yesterday you were not trace able i was not able to breath as if some had taken my life from me ..... he paused ... i am a loser not you are i lost my parents. i build wall around me so no one could come in ...but you ... now daily you try to leave me ... i can't be happy for a single day ......every time my happiness vanish ,yesterday i felt my life is completed .... looked at her ....
Geet : was giving a blank look.
Maan: what so ever happen i will not leave you not at  any cost or not let any one take your place.... you let me own you once i can stay for the rest of my life with that pleasant thought....as someone from heart loved me once.....
Geet: choked ... i didn't said i don't love you
Maan: hmmm
Geet: i just want you should be with a healthy ...
Maan: if you love me then don't say a word as it hurt me inside my heart.... let stay each & every min together without thinking what will happen next....
Geet: looked at him
Maan : Zindagi ka aagla pal kai kis ko khabar ..jo ha unn ko tou jee la  baghar kaise Daar ka .
Geet: Maan
Maan: stop her saying a word as he placed his lips on hers. slow he run his fingers in her hairs  whisper "jeeo jab tak saan ha ..." kissed her forehead ...
Geet  couldn't stop him as his love & emotions was very strong in front of  her's...
Maan: i am sure you aren't sick .. he placed his hand on his chest ....
Geet: looked at him
Maan: you can't feel.... he brush his nose next to hers..
Geet: but
Maan: just leave a side everything & enjoy what we have...  he kissed her again.
Geet: couldn't help it she let him own her once again...
Maan hug her as tight as he could .... she felt so save that she slept in few mins...smiled "pagal ha meri jaan" he carefully made her sleep....
At Present
Geet: still siting next to the window shyly smiling .... it was about 7 no sign of Maan. " i better go & ask someone" she walk to garden...
watchman:beta you want some thing
Geet: no i am looking for Maan
watchman : he has gone to mandar
Geet: where is that?
watchman : it is up that hill...
Geet : but how he will reach there? she looked at top of the hill
watchman: maan baba has a horse he always go on it...
Geet: walked in she tried his number but it was continually saying out of reach..... she changed ....apply sindoor wore bangles..... today i wanted to see you first in morning but you left me without telling me ....she heard some noise ... "Maan agai " she ran out ...
JAY: hi bhabi
Geet: you at this hour
PARI: yes we she hug her baat hee kuch aise ha
Geet; i missed you yesterday
PARI: actually JAY  was very busy.
JAY: where is Maan? i want to tell him the great news.
Geet baat kya ha ...woh mandar gai ha
JAY: oh ....
Geet: why dont you tell me ?
JAY: bhabi news is you are not sick it was brij's who gave dr money to make a fake report....paused
Geet:Maan was right he was right...she jumped....
Dadi: what happen beta ?
Geet: dadi i am not sick she hug her ...Maan was right he said un ka dil nahi maanta ...
Dadi: hug her back..."where is he ?"
Geet: he has gone to Mandar
Dadi: when ? shocked
Geet: before dawn
Dadi: pagal ha woh ...it rain it must be slippery ....
Geet: dadi lets go and find him....
JAY: bhabi why you are so worried he is not a kid
Dadi: he is worst than a kid......JAY you go on jeep....
Geet: i will too come with you ..
Dadi: beta its a bad idea...
watch man ran in ...dadi dadi ..maan baba
Dadi: what happen
watch man a villager told Maan baba  fall from horse and he is injured ........
Geet just sank in sofa...
to be cont ..sorry  to stop here ........thx for comments
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Despair 27

sorry readers for making you wait for so many days. now i will try my level best to update it religiously... few of you are  not happy from me as i suddenly finished SS Alone in Paradise ... dear there was nothing left i guess ... i thought to end when it was at its peak .....




Tanu: Mamoo why you are so said ?
Ved: yes tell me.. cup his face..
Maan: yar dekho your mom took your didi in & asked me not to follow them...
Tanu: we are here we will help you...
Maan: are you sure? try to smile... his mind was stuck how Geet will take her illness.
Tanu: yes...
Maan: ok help my sweet princess ....
Tanu you talk to your dadi we will see. they walk in
Maan:dadi why you arrange this ..
Dadi: beta i & meera had few dreams that why...
Maan:dadi...
Dadi: beta is Geet really sick?
Maan: dadi i ask Jay to confirm it ......
Dadi: when you came to know about this ..?
Maan day before yesterday.....
Dadi: why you didn't told me?
Maan: dadi it is not yet confirm ..
Dadi: then why you are having long face ,just cheer up...
Maan: hug dadi...
Dadi: go & get ready.... all your friends & guest will be  come .
Maan: ok dadi he walked in.
Meera: hello where are you going....
Maan: to change
Meera: go to other room yahan jana maana ha.
Maan: didi...
Meera: bus order is order she turn him & show him the way to other side of room...
Tanu wait ..hold his hand
Maan: what happen?
Tanu : come here .... she pull him on other side ...
Ved: mama mama
Meera: yes beta ..
Ved: my stomach ache ....ouch he lay on sofa ....
Meera: who was guarding the door quickly left the handle & ran to Ved.
Tanu: your time start now Mamoo go in.... she asked him to go to room...
Maan: smiled you naughty pie walked in
Geet: didi please close the doori...... i am not able to close it
Maan: walk on his toes & very care fully tied it
Geet: suddenly turn..."YOU" turn back
Maan: yes me placed his arm around her waist.

















Geet: why you are here? try to remove his hand
Maan to help you
Geet: but i don't need your help
Maan:smiled you just taken my help
Geet: please i am not in any kind of joke mood
Maan: picked up the necklace & placed it around Geet neck.





















Geet: please you go from here.



















Maan: wait ...he made her sit on stool kneel down
Geet :what are you doing?
Maan: nothing.. placed bangles in her arm..
Geet: i think you have helped me......
Maan: slightly picked up her chin..."why you are so angry from me?"
Geet: "i think if we better talk on this later....
Maan: hmmm
Meera: open door..."Maan you are here..."
Tanu & Ved:  had a laughter ...
Meera: i will beat all three of you..
Ved: why us Didi too ?
Meera: why didi?
Tanu: actually didi asked she want to meet Mamoo.
Geet: looked at them in surprise...."when i said ?"
Ved: you said ....when i was changing clothes ?
Geet: woh...paused
Ved:  you didn't ask what Mamoo is doing?
Geet: i asked like that..
Ved: i thought you want to meet Mamoo. oh i acted just like that.that i am having stomach ache...
Maan: smiled
Meera; Maan you are spoiling my kids...
Maan: what i did....smiled ...
Meera: you all out or i will ....
Maan: ok ok ...they quickly walked out.
Meera: pagal ha yeh ...
Geet: smiled
Meera: yes you too smile........
Geet: woh tou mein..
Meera: acha acha theek ha jaildi se ready hojao ...


Dadi& bejee entered ...
Dadi: Meera did you asked Dev to come
Meera: dadi he will not be able to come he told me ..
Dadi: yeh Dev's mom she also left
Meera: why you are so worried ?
Dadi: people will ask
Meera: since when you are so worried about people?
Dadi: beta
Meera: dadi bus kara please don't take their side .....
Dadi: ok  beta is Geet ready
Meera: yes her husband made her ready...
Dadi: kya
Meera: Maan& kids made me fool & ..she fixed her saree....
Geet: didi i apologize from his side...
Meera: oh now my bhabi will take his side too
Geet: didi..paused
Meera: smiled just teasing you..
Dadi: ok beta after some time bring Geet out ... Guest are here.....
Meera: sure  dadi...


Maan knocked at door...
Meera: yes come in
Maan: if you both ladies allow can i came in
Meera: Maan don't do acting
Maan: didi see my shirt button is broken
Meera: looked at his shirt ... "you are still a small kid"
Maan: didi please don't scold
Meera: Maan i have to fix my necklace ..you take dadi's help
Maan: dadi said take your's ..where to go? made a sad face
Meera: Geet please fix his button
Geet: me
Meera: who is Geet here....
Maan: quickly forward thread & needle
Geet:  took it from him ....started sewing....."stop staring at me i am nervous ...."
Maan: ...he closed his eyes ...
Geet: looked at his face
Meera: Geet
Geet: jee
Meera: stop staring ...
Geet: shyly smiled ....quickly sew it


Beejee : beta come quickly .....
Meera: Maan you & Geet come together i will go & receive guest
Maan: sure
Geet: but..
Meera: angrily stared at her..... she left the room
Maan: offer his hand..
 Geet :Quietly hold it ...
They both walk to the Garden....
Maan introducer Geet to all the guest ... they walk to each table ....
Dadi:  attention everyone please ....i invited you all here to be part of  my beloved grand so wedding.... as there were many rumors i want to clear it all so that next time you dont pay attention on it ... Maan was in love with my bahu he didnot had any choice to stop people pointed at them in such critical condition he married her .....now i will ask Maan & Geet to tell us about their love story ..winked at them....
both felt embarrassed...
Maan:dadi yeh kya ha
Dadi: don't be shy ..tell everyone...
Maan: looked at Geet .....  he cleared his throat " shall I !"
Geet: looked at him
Maan: Geet  father was ill he wanted to go for his treatment , he asked Dadima to keep Geet with her till he is fine.... he looked at Geet .... Dadi ma asked me to go and bring her ..... he smiled the best part was dadi thought Geet is uncles 13 years old daughter.... i really didnot had any problem to bring a kid with me ..i drive to Geet's place ... it was a very stormy night .... when i reached there uncle was out of town , only Beejee was there , she asked me to take Geet with me to Delhi. as their land lord was blackmailing them ... Geet live was on risk ...he smiled i without thinking asked Beejee to tell Geet to sit in my car..... That day my wife was suffering from high fever ... Beejee  covered Geet in blanket made her lay in back of my seat...
An old lady: beta make it fast ...
Maan: yes yes.... i drove out of city .... when i was on high way i heard ..Geet asking for water ..... i had to stop care ....and make her drink water...... when i removed her blanket i was shocked to see a young girl in my car...... running with high few..... she was murmuring "dont leave me ..." i dont know what happen to me i fall in love with her ... or i made promise to my self i will never leave her ....... That is my love story
a girl : love at first sight
Maan: yes you can say that.....since then i am with her in all up and down of  life.
Dadi: you will be till the end beta ...kissed his forehead...
 old lady :beta when you fall in love with Maan
Geet: looked at her
Maan: she is still falling in love ....
everyone had a laughter.....
Meera: pulled Maan ears...


guest started leaving .....
Dadi: beta you take Geet in
Meera: sure ....she took Geet in farm house room....
Geet: didi can i change ?
Meera: why Geet?
Geet: i am tired
Meera: let Maan come then you change...
Geet; ok she sit on bed...
after 20 mins Maan enter room ... he smiled at her
Maan: why you are siting at sofa ? he walked to her
Geet: didnot reply
Maan: i know this room is not decorated but ...gave a naughty smiled.. he sit next to Geet hold her hand "why you are so quite "
Geet: i have to change.
Maan: sure you can....
Geet; removed his hand and was about to walk to wash room
Maan: hold her hand "can i help you?"
Geet: no i dont need ...
Maan : ok ..he switched on tv
Geet: changed and walked out ..she grab pillow ....
Maan: who was sitting on bed grab her hand...
Geet: please chora i am sleepy
Maan: bed is here why you were are you going? he pull her she lost her balance and fall flat on bed..
Geet: please
Maan: placed his finger on her lips "chup.."
Geet: Wait 

Maan:looked at her stopped

Geet:before coming near to me  you should give me a promise..

Maan: smiled just a promise..came closer to her

Geet: really i am serious ..try to stop him with her hand

Maan:"what you want?"

Geet: Till i am fine you will stay away from me no relations ....

Maan: looked at her with an open mouth. 

Geet: for world i am your wife bit no relations 

Maan: but yesterday we made a relation i guess.

Geet; what all happen yesterday think it was a dream .....if you agree with me then i will stay with you 

Maan: but

Geet: i am sleepy she turn on other side 

Maan: looked at roof of the room as he did not get what to do ...

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Alone in Paradise 15

Maan didn't get how to stop her from crying.."please you first relax"
 try to look at her but she was totally hiding her self in his arms...."if you will tell me then i will be able to find out what had happen?"
Geet: Take me home please...
Maan: i will take you home but first you calm down.. he drag her to car...
Geet: i donot want to stay here any more...
Maan: open car... "first you sit here & tell me what happen"
Geet: was all wet she was shivering with cold & fear.....wrap her arm around herself....
Maan: open car back door , taken out his coat..."wear it "he gave it to her...
Geet: looked at him & taken the coat.....
Maan: sit next to door near her...hold her hand "now tell me what happen, why you are so frighten?"
Geet: took a deep breath.... "i just don't want to marry him"
Maan: bus itni se baat ha.... looked at her hide his smiled.. slightly press her hand
Geet: he was rude with me...
Maan: what he did.... in an angry tone..
Geet: he was drunk , & was using filthy language .
Maan: did he touch you or hurt you....?he suddenly stand.
Geet: where are you going?
Maan: i told him not to hurt you or i will.... he closed her door....
Geet: where are you going? open door..
Maan: you sit in car i will teach him a lesson..
Geet: Maan see i am fine leave it ..
Maan: Geet i said you sit in car..
Geet:  no i will come with you .. she hold his arm....
Maan: looked at her you sit i will be back in 5 mins..
Geet: please i don't want to sit in dark alone..
Maan: ok come..... they both walk to the hotel
Geet: if you listen me once i thing it is not needed.
Maan shhhhh..... he walk to the hall..he stopped
nt was shouting on top of her voice...."you idiot what have you done . you have ruin my plan"
Arjun: yar baat tou suno
nt: kya kuch suna ka leya baqi ha.
Arjun: oh yar i will say sorry.
nt: sorry... i asked you to carry on the drama for a month or so till i marry Maan.
Maan closed his fist
Arjun: when you cant make your place in 10 years time how would you make in 1 month.
nt: you fool jealousy would have made a relation...i know he love Geet but when he had seen you with her he would have.....Geet: looked at Maan...
Maan face was totally red with anger..he just removed Geet hand from his arm..... walk to the center of the room....."bravo Arjun & nt  i treated you as my friend & you both had so much of venom for me in your hearts "
nt: looked at Maan: oh you are  here....
Maan: shouted" what you think i would have left her alone & came here by her own ....
nt: murmur or was trying to gather words
 Maan: nt if you liked me you should have come to me & told me directly , why you try to ruin an innocent life?"
nt: you care for that orphan more than yourself do you know that.. she grab Maan shirt..
Maan:  let him self free... "If i care for her it is my problem not your's,& dare not think she is alone"
nt: why not mine? i loved you for last 10 years ...it was love at first sight.... but you never looked at me or cared for me...
Maan: nt pyar insan ka bas mein nahi hota yeh to hojata ha.....yeh nai dekhata ka kon kya ha ...nor religion nor status ..if it is done with status then it will be not love for the person it would be love for that's person's money... nt  let me tell you,  you loved my status my money, you never cared for me .... you always wanted i should give you expensive things....did you ever spend time with me other than that.... you always wanted a VIP treatment as my friend & spotlight on you..
nt: no i loved you..
Maan: if you loved me then you should have step down. you should be happy for me that i found my love .... but you continually try to create problem ... first was the drink do you think i don't know or i am a fool ... at new year eve i left Geet for 5 mins & you switched her drink.... then you mange to take  those pictures ...
nt: that....
Maan:i am not finish yet .... you send those pics at home so that you can create problem between us...nt my love is pure i love her with core of my heart ....even she shout or fight with me i will not be angry with her.... for some time i was annoyed from her .& you grab the opportunity & send Arjun proposal.... ..he looked at Arjun....I knew Arjun for  last 10 years, Geet is not 1 percent of his kind..but here i was defeated once again from a old friend..he betrayed me , broken my trust on him .. he did not thought of our friendship or time we had spend together he just became greedy for my money....
Arjun: Maan..
Maan: stopped him by his hand..."you both want my money take it he took out his wallet ...his credit cards ...& throw it on their faces.....take it but dare not hurt her  .... "
nt: hold Maan hand ..Please Maan..i love you...
Maan: enough of it ... i don't know i will marry her or not  , or  where our life will take us but i don't want to meet you ever in my life again... i always treated you all as my sibling as my family but you had stab me in my back... i didn't felt that alone when i lost my parents as much i am feeling now...... All alone standing with people who are wearing masks .........who is mine?... you arjun or you nt.....he pointed at them.... he felt some one hold his hand..a cold shivering hand....
Maan: turn back ..
Geet: lets go from here ....
they both walk out of hotel... to parking lot.....
Maan: i am really feeling lonely today..
Geet:  i am too as lonely as you are ..... tears were falling down her eyes .....
Maan: i don't know how to apologize from you for my so called friends deed...
Geet: ssshhhh  placed her fingers at his lips.....no need to.....  they both stared at each other........ "if you don't mind can i be your friend?"
Maan: do you really want to be?
Geet: yes i really want to be that person friend ,who daily send me flowers?who cover up my crazy acts when i am drunk...? who sit for hours & press my head when i have headache... who know me very well what kind of dresses i like to wear & he doesn't feel ashamed to show me off even in those old fashion dresses  ..... who respect me with my past.... doesn't care & be come my driver just to protect me from this monster world ... her throat choke
Maan looked at her..... cup her face in his hand ....."don't cry please as i can't stand your tears."
both looked at each other ..their tears & rain flowed down on their faces ........they didn't knew either it was of happiness or of pain
Geet: placed her hand on his cheek ..."i am sorry"
Maan: smiled ... " swear to God i will next time be very care full if you are ....paused "
Geet: blushed..... next time you will not be needing any permission...paused
Maan: permission for ...
Geet: kuch nai.... it was raining heavily,, both ran to car...
Maan : oh so i can.. he try to come near to her....
Geet: raised her hand..
Maan: you just said next time i may not be needing permission...i though..
Geet: shyly hug him
Maan: hug her back.... he kissed her fore head...... wipe her tears from her face....."no more tears .."
Geet: kissed his cheek ...sorry....
Maan: smiled here too .... he bring his other cheek in front of her...
Geet: kissed it too..
Maan: smiled.... & &.... his cell started ringing.....Oh Dadi..
Maan: hi dadi ..
Dadi: where are you ? i am calling you for last 1 hour ... it is raining heavily
Maan: dadi dadi : cool down..he put call on speaker
Dadi: please go to hotel & pick up Geet..she is neither picking up her cell..
Maan: dadi aik bad news ha....
Geet: looked at him.. he placed his hand on Geet mouth
Dadi: kya........bolo Geet theek ha
Maan: dadi please listen with a strong heart.
Dadi: bolo ..shouted..
Maan: dadi Geet na mujhe se shadi ka leya ha kardi ha ..
Geet: oh when i said ....shouted she managed to remove her hand
Dadi: really...
Maan: you don't want to marry me ?
Geet: i didn't even said that...
Dadi: you both came home at once..
Maan: dadi jab tak yeh ha nai kara gi i will not ..
Dadi: Maan... tang na karo warna i will tell her that you send her flowers..
Geet: dadi you knew the secret admirer
Maan: smiled...dadi ......
Dadi: ok kiss her from my side....
Maan: sure dadi ..
Geet: dadi..
Maan cut call...now dadi had given me permission.....
Geet: just closed her eyes ..
Maan : kissed her ... I LOVE YOU..whisper in her ears....as the broke
Geet: I LOVE YOU TOO.. placed her arm around his neck Kissed him back......


They lived happily ever after.....in their paradise

                                          

                                                          The End 


special thanks to you all for reading it & commenting on it... i hope this SS will stay in your heart & mind for quite sometime
special thanks to Hasan Shirazi for letting me use his track....

will be back with other SS or FF's... Love you all...

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Alone in Paradise 14

Dadi saw Geet trying the saree ...

Geet: dadi how i am looking?

Dadi: perfect.

Geet: dadi you know i never though in my life that i will wear a designer dress

Dadi: beta kismat

Geet: yes dadi kismat.

Dadi

Dadi: called Maan...

Maan: dadi is everything fine at home

Dadi: yes beta

Maan: then why you called ?

Dadi: beta what you think you will fool me?

Maan: dadi what i did?

Dadi: beta you send that gift

Maan: why would i?

Dadi: beta

Maan: you said kismat ..if she is in my kismat no one can take her away from me ....i am just trying my luck today.

Dadi: did you talk to Arjun?

Maan: yes he said he already know about her .

Dadi:beta then why you are taking risking ?

Maan: dadi i love to take risk 

Dadi: but if you lose

Maan: dadi some one said "it is better to love & lost then ever love "

Dadi: she is looking for you.

Maan: let her just you don't tell her.

Dadi: i will not

Maan: so sweet of you...

Dadi: ok send driver at 8

Maan: why Arjun not coming?

Dadi: he just said reach hotel at 8:30

Maan: ok i will send....aur kuch

Dadi: Maan think once again.

Maan: dadi why you are so worried ?

Dadi: beta i am sacred when she will find out that you are that person ,how will she react?

Maan:dadi we will see .....now chill.....

Dadi: beta as you wish cut the call...she saw Geet talking to Pari & laughing.

Maan: open his laptop & started watching new year party video.

smiled 

At home 

Geet: Pari please find who is this guy?

Pari: how you are sure he is a Guy might be a girl?

Geet: how a girl?

Pari: your some old friend

Geet: who can she be?

Pari: you tell me where the flower boy stand i will try to find

Geet: he stand near Maan's office ..i first saw him when i was going for interview.

Pari: Yar  Maan hoga 

Geet: pagal ho why he will give me this when i am getting engaged to his friend

Pari: what  to whom?

Geet: Arjun.

Pari: are you mad?

Geet: why you are shouting?

Pari: did Maan allowed you?

Geet: why he will stop ?

Pari: Geet you have selected a wrong guy?

Geet: why you are saying like that ? & after all what Maan did to me i really don't feel like trusting any one.

Pari what he did? he cared for you ...

Geet:  he cared for me ..what happed at new year eve?

Pari: nothing

Geet: i slapped him for what he did ..& i am sure he will not send me flowers ...

Pari: you slapped him..when ?....shocked

Geet: day before yesterday..

Pari: why?

Geet: for.... paused

Pari: tell?

Geet:  nothing

Pari: really Geet you ....

Geet: Pari i know he asked you to hide from me ..but those pictures 

PAri: what pictures ?

Geet; nothing .... 

Pari: Geet tell me ... what is bothering you? & why you said yes for Arjun....?

Geet: he propose me 

Pari: what about Maan?

Geet: please stop it...

Pari: let me tell you, you are not able to see pure love...
Geet: what you want to say?
Pari: i just want to say open your eyes & see who is real & who is fake? i don't know what happen between you & him but that day.
Geet: hmmm ok i have to get ready
Pari: best of luck i hope he is right for you.
Geet: looked at Pari ..she was totally confused ....."ok let me go today then i will decide what to do?"
Pari : ok..
******
Geet got ready ...looked her self in mirror ....
Dadi: beta car is waiting for you...
Geet: thx dadi... she managed her Saree & went out
Dadi: took a deep ...
Geet: sit at back ."please drive fast i am already late."
Driver: hmmm....
Geet; just looked out she didnot noticed at Maan who was continually staring at her .
they reached hotel..
Geet: please you wait here i will be free in hour ....she quickly got out ..she was very nervous .walk inn.
Maan parked the car & followed her ...
Geet at reception: Arjun.
lady: you go in main hall..to your left..
Geet: ajeeb ha he really doesn't have manners ... receive karna kaleya  tou hota ....
walked in.. the room was dark .....
Geet: any body there?
ARjun: yes   he spotted light on her...
Geet: please close it ....
Arjun: why?
Geet: it is ...
suddenly the room was lighten.
Arjun: what the hell?
Geet: what?
Arjun: why you didn't wore the dress i gave you? he pull his arm
Geet: which dress...
Arjun: that black one... yuck you are so old fashion.... you are going to be my wife not my grandma..
Geet; leave my hand...
Arjun: oh miss Khurana you are very rich wearing diamonds..he run his finger on her neckline..
Geet; push him.. you are drunk.... leave me..& i am not Khurana.
Arjun: why don't you  too drink..
Geet; i don't
Arjun: but you did at new year eve...& you did dance.. come dance with me
Geet; that was accident..try to move away.
Arjun: when you are not from Khurana family then who are you?
Geet: i am & orphan & i am Dadi's Maid ...
Arjun: what the hell is this .. he let her free...nt told me that you are Maan's cousin..i thought marrying with you for couple of months will make me rich.
Geet : looked at him
Arjun: oh..... that why he protect you.... gave a wicked laughter....
Geet: i should better leave..
Arjun: you can't leave until i want to.stop her way..
Geet: you can't stop me... she try to push him away...
Arjun: yesterday i was insulted because of you.my friend made fun of me...
Geet: try to free her self... she was crying
Arjun: pull her..her saree tore
Geet: pushed him hard.. he was so drank he fall on floor.. Geet managed to open the door.... she ran out ...

Maan who walked behind Geet.. when he saw Geet entering hall he walk back to car.....it was drizzling he was walking in parking lot.
Geet ran like crazy to car.."where is the car..driver driver..she shouted .."
Maan: turn back as he thought he heard Geet..
Geet; looked at him .. ran to him & hug...
Maan was shocked to see her like that .."what happen"
Geet: just take me home please...
Maan: relax ..hug her back
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Alone in Paradise 13

Maan: walked to car... he smiled "if any other girl would be at her place would have done same , after seeing those pictures " ...he wore his  sun glasses ..... " it was my fault i would have told her that she was drunk." he drove the car . he stop at a signal ...
Flower boy knocked his window" your money sir"
Maan: smiled keep it & take this ..gave him more ...
Flower boy: "what for this?"
Maan  deliver  flowers twice a day & don't tell name at any cost..
Flower boy : oh ishq ..
Maan: stared in anger....
Flower boy zip his lips ...
Maan: send best flowers ....
Flower boy :don't you worry izzazt ka sawal ha ......
Maan smiled & left.... "miss attitude i am maan singh khurana i have not learn how to lose ."
He drove to his office ..
Adi: sir you have a meeting...
Maan: Adi cancel that & call Delhi best designer .
Adi: your designer
Maan: no ladies .... & keep it to your self
Adi: gave Maan a strange look."sir if you will call here then everyone will come to know about it "
Maan: ok you arrange my meeting.
Adi: walked out..
Maan: i could have taken revenge from you of that slap but i will take in my way..... looked at her picture in his cell... "oh i have to call to Arjun" he dialed his number
Arjun: hi kaisa yaad kiya?
Maan: actually i wanted to tell you something
Arjun: since when you are becoming so formal Maan?
Maan: i want to tell you something about Geet
Arjun: "what you will tell Maan? i already know everything"
Maan:bit shocked "how you know?"
Arjun:"yar i want to marry her, i will not find who she is"
Maan: what you know?
Arjun: Maan is this must to tell you ? i will ask her myself if i want to... & please don't be her lawyer here... he said bit harshly ...
Maan: you are taking it in other sense
Arjun: Maan let me handle it in my way.
Maan: ok but you listen one thing you dare not hurt her.
Arjun: Maan i know how to handle ladies
Maan: ok lets see ...i will keep an eye on you ... he cut the call....

Adi: sir i have arranged the meeting.
Maan Ok he picked up his cell & walk out.....

At home
Dadi: beta why you are so upset?
Geet: Dadi pata nai
Dadi: ok tell me do you have any friend?
Geet: yes  Pari is my friend
Dadi: ok call her home
Geet: why dadi?
Dadi: beta you talk to her you will feel better
Geet: smiled
Dadi: and do what you like ? as it is your life ....
nakul: Geet beta
Geet: jee
nakul aagya  tumhara phool 
Geet: looked at it

Geet dadi is not these beautiful  .. she smiled 
Dadi: yes it is
nakul: beta boy said he was late as he went to collect these flowers..
Dadi: nakul you didnot asked him
nakul: he said he can't tell.
Geet: dadi my secret admire is ....paused  she started arranging it in living room

Dadi: looked at her face .... "Maan why are you doing this ?" murmur

Geet: dadi i want to find him

Dadi : sure beta 

Geet: smiled ... walk to her room to call Pari.

At designer shop

Maan:s please show me a grace full dress 

Designer: sir you tell me what is the age of the lady

Maan: 24 or 25

Designer: buy these

Maan: i said grace full.

Designer: now days girls wear such dress

Maan: looked at saree ..."pack that "

Designer: oh for your grand ma

Maan: stared show me jewelery too.

Designer: i think Black diamonds will go with that....

Maan : looked at the  necklace .... "please pack this " ....  murmur "surly this will suit you.. smiled at his own thought . went to courier office ....
Maan: please you type this note with it
  
 I hope you like this small gift .do wear it tonight.
 he asked them to send at home address.


At home Dadi & Geet were having lunch.
nakul: beta parcel for you..
Geet: now what? she quickly open the box
Dadi: wow beta such an elegant saree...
Geet: dadi see this..
Dadi: diamonds...
Geet: dadi Arjun send this she pass the note
Dadi: too read the note.." i think he realized his mistake"
Geet: yes... i guess
Dadi: call him & thank him
Geet: dadi i will say it in evening.
Dadi: as you wish beta ... 
nakul: beta some more flowers....


  
Geet: hold her head "i will find this person"




 to be cont

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