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despair 40

I never thought this FF will have 40 parts thanks for your support .
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Geet: Maan what would you like to have for lunch.
Maan: nothing i am not hungry.
Geet: why? looked at him
Maan: bus try to concentrated on his work.
Geet: am i a bad cook?
Maan: when i said that?
Geet: kya baat ha you didn't like some thing.
Maan: took a deep breath ...Why you felt like that?
Geet: you are acting strange..
Maan: nothing happen i was just thing regarding project.
Geet: you can share with me may be i help you
Maan: smiled ...
Geet: you will have lunch right...
Maan: ok baba jaan kaha jao gai.
Geet: smiled .. Sorry kuchi kuchi... pull his cheeks
Maan: hold her hand what is this kuchi kuchi Geet.
Geet: i use to do this to rano my younger sis when she use to look cute .. tears come in her eyes .. now you are my every relation that why i am doing this to you..
Maan: wipe her tears any time you can do..
Geet: mind tou nai karta ?
Maan: no my cuto pie... kissed her fingers ..
Geet: did you call Dadi?
Maan: no
Geet: why?
Maan: i forgot , i was so tense when you ..paused
Geet: lets call her now.
Maan: Geet do you know how to make biryani
Geet: yes
Maan: ok make that...
Geet: sure boss..she went to kitchen 
Maan: noticed she was sms some one every time she received a message she use to smile.
Geet: just looked at Maan he was more looking at her then to his files..."koi kam ha kya"
Maan: no
Geet: ok 
Maan: in one meeting she liked Veer so much if she will meet him few more times surly she will agree. 
Geet: looked at Maan sms lchcha : he is cooking something in his mind
lchcha: reply "don't tease him"
Geet: kuch kuch hota ha yar.... :) ..
again & again Geet cell was vibrating.Maan just twist & turn on couch. 
Maan: why i am caring i my self wanted that? he again open his files.

Geet: sing's 
halchal hui zara shor hua 
dil chor hua teri aur hua
aise chali jab hawa   to tease Maan pass by him  covered his face with her duppata ..

Maan: Geet
Geet; ishq hua hi hua
ishq hua hi hua 
Maan pagal hogai ho...
Geet: ishq hua ..
Maan kis se 
Geet: ha koi , she brought plate sit next to him..."ahhh Maan"


Maan: kon
Geet: placed a spoon in his mouth ..."acha bacha baat nahii karta khana khata huai"
Maan: couldnot stop him self he just smiled ...
Geet: you look cute when you smile.
Maan: i am  noticing you are totally changed.
Geet:  Yeh Mausam Ka Jaadu Hai Mitwa 
Maan: check her fore head Geet i thought i married a serious lady.
Geet; you are wrong Maan i was the most mischief studied of my class.
Maan: i can see ,since you are alone with me you are just teasing me.
Geet: smiled ok i will  not tease you again. made sad face.
Maan : Geet
Geet; while making him eat. jee
Maan: who you were sms?
Geet; looked at him is that must to tell?
Maan: no
Geet: then leave it.  
Maan: ok ...
Geet; by they way you are very miser?
Maan: why?
Geet; you ate whole plate but  never praised , how i made it?
Maan: it is tasty 
Geet: just tasty
Maan: ok very tasty ...
Geet: let me check i think i didnot made nice..
Maan: trust me it is very very tasty..
Geet: smiled .... my gift .... open her hand infront of him
Maan: "gift "
Geet: yes when ever i use to cook at my home my papa use to give me gift...now you... she just choked...
Maan:  hug her he took plate from her  pull her more closed ... "what gift you want tell me "
Geet: promise 
Maan: yes 
Geet: soch la 
Maan soch leya made her head rest at his chest run his finger in her hairs ... you just ask.
Geet: pyar kara ...played with  his shirt button
Maan: what shocked at her boldness
Geet: yes do what i asked you ...you said you will...
Maan:  looked at her ...
Geet: see you didnot she try to get up ..he pull her back to him
Maan: madam what you think of Maan Singh Khurana..?
Geet: "a miser" made sad face
Maan:pull her closed kissed her ... at fore head... 
Geet: looked at him pat his fore head.  theek ha i am going to take shower .. you are just to miser... she quickly got up...
Maan: smiled he just let her go "wait i all tell you " 
Geet:  was just lost she was relaxing she didnot  heard when he enter
Maan: sit  he kissed her closed eyes 



Geet: aap she quickly open her eyes 
Maan: placed his finger on her lips   shhhhh .kissed on other...eyes.. rub his nose with her....
Geet; just lost her heart beat... she couldn't even open eyes as she felt shy... he kissed her cheek.  whisper ...
Maan: baad mein baqi  (rest later )... splash water from tub at her face...
Geet: open her eyes .. Maan was going out ... winked at her...
Geet; took a deep breath... uff why i asked him all my fault, he will just tease me now.. she was still feeling goosebumps ... she smiled at his naughtiness... "how i forget to look?" she quickly took shower dress up .. it she went out..
Maan was laying on bed...he placed his hand on his eyes 
Geet; kya huwa aap ko.. she check 
Maan: sona do i am sleepy.
Geet: but Veer ask us to come by 5.
Maan: you go i want to sleep..
Geet: but it doesn't look nice
Maan: please Geet you go.
Geet; smiled she got he is just again sad. she covered him with blanket. kissed his fore head .."Ok you sleep i will go" she walked out 
Maan: she will really go ?..he sit but again lay down in anger....


to be cont....do comment....waiting.
do tell she should go or not.......?

26 comments:

  1. me 1st...me 1st...yayyy!!
    m loving it :D
    Swati

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  2. im happy u didnt stopped writin
    though u changed the place where
    u use to update.very nic update

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  3. hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
    awesome update
    loved it
    love da naughty geet
    loved da jealous maan
    cant wait 4 more
    con soon
    thanks 4 da pm
    (ARMAANKSGFAN)

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  4. Loved it

    Cyum321

    Cyma Khan

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  5. wow so sweet he is jealous aww nice ..i think she will not going with out maan. thank you for update so sweet part ..and thanks for update.

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  6. ha ha maan jealous....i m loving it...do continue soon...

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  7. Interesting.. would love to see this part of Maan.. m loving it..

    Yukti

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  8. wowwwwwwww
    geet is playing d game vry well
    hope maan becomes alright soon

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  9. lovely update...
    do update soon...

    dollie16

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  10. Amaxing update!!!!!!

    Loved Geets cool attitude and Maans irritating attitude.........

    Loved them all.........

    continue soon..........

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  11. Amaxing update!!!!!!

    Loved Geets cool attitude and Maans irritating attitude.........

    Loved them all.........

    continue soon..........

    Love
    Lakshmi

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  12. nice part
    plz continue soon

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  13. heyyy ... nadia .... not fair yaar ... aise mat tadpao .... plzzzzzzzz ......

    waise i loved d update ....

    thnx 4 d pm ...

    continue soon ...

    plzzzzzzzz yaar .... also update simply love ... plzzzzzzzzzz ... plzzzzzzzzzzzz ... baby face ... plzzzzzzz ...

    luv ..

    angel .....

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  14. loved it!

    loved the way how geet is behaving towards maan!

    continue soon!

    -SWEET SCORPIO.

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  15. VERY NICEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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  16. AWESOME NADDIYA LOVE THE UPDATE DO CONTINUE SOON
    FROM MANO :)

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  17. Superb update.... loved it

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  18. Hey Naddiya,
    Liked how Geet is making Maan jealous of Veer. She is telling him time & again how she want him to be every relation but he is not gripping it properly.
    Geet's getting quite bold.

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  19. Awesome update Naddiya
    loving it how geet is teasing maan
    continue soon

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  20. it looks like maan want
    to play cupid veer & geet
    if i'm not wrong but why
    maaneet scene was so adorable
    geet real loves him its her whole
    world revolve maan only
    beautiful love story
    pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
    thank yu so much
    for cont my dear
    thanks pm

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  21. wow lovely update.. liking the naughty geet... continue soon

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  22. hey naddiya...like ur ff always....
    punam

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