Geet woke up next morning... she look at the receiver.."why it is here ? hello hello..."
Maan: hmmmmm...in his sleep
Geet: who is there ?
Maan: open his eyes as he heard her voice... Self thought ..good morning my sleeping beauty... he cut the call..
Geet: pata nahi kon tha ..she hang the phone.... her cell vibrate.... " hope you have a nice day..."geet smiled text back.. " how is Maan? do take care of him ?" ..walked to freshen up... "she recollected how he came in that day to washroom and scared her . she blush... Maan i have hardly spend 15 days of my life with you but those days are my full life , i can spend my rest of life with your thoughts... sometime a single moment is enough & sometime the whole life goes to waste.... i got that single moment...she apply her sindoor ... " looked her self in mirror... "why i am so fresh today as if you are just around me .. " she felt strength in her self.
AT Maan place
Maan: your present make me complete .. i felt you so much today... he smiled at Adi.
ADI: sir
Maan: yes
ADI: is bhabi coming back...
Maan: no not yet.
ADI:Ok sir i have to go to the site can i go.
Maan: yes sure i will call the therapist.
ADI: see you then....
Maan: smiled..
ADI: looked at him in strange way... aaj huwa kya ha he is smiling again & again... went...
At Geet place:
Kumkum: good morning
Geet; good morning didi..she hug her,,
Kumkum: nice to see you so energetic Geet.
Geet:smiled back didi can i go to gallery
Kumkum yes sure i will ask your bhai to drop you.
Geet: thanks... her cell vibrate ... she looked at number it was Meera ... excuse me she walk to room ...self thought if she ask me to call Maan what i will do....she calm her voice "hello"
Meera: wah beta wah ..tum dono to bhool gai ho,,
GeeT: nahi didi...
Meera: neither you or Maan called us ...
Geet: looked at Maan pic placed next to her pillow... "oh didi actually we were"
Meera:" that saying is so true "son is a son until he get's a wife, daughter is daughter for rest of her life..call Maan i want to talk to him"
Geet: didi let me call him you please hold , she called at ADi number
Maan: saw her call he didnot picked
Maan:. text her what happen?
Geet: where is Maan? while talking to Meera
Maan: "what happen?"
Geet: "meera didi want to talk to Maan kya karo?" text ..she kept on talking to Meera asking about everyone at home ,weather etc
Maan: reply"ask her to call at his number , as he has gone to see site..."
Geet: read the message smile...to Meera .... "didi you call on his number he is not at home"
Meera: "ok bye"
Geet: relaxed ... text "thanks for saving me Aaj tou mein phass gai thi"text
Maan: :P send her text
Geet: :@ ok i am going to gallery see you..text
Maan: why so early?
Geet: aapas ki baat ha i want to give surprise my beloved hubby... see you...text... she kissed Maan pic kept it in her bag walk out... Kumkum saw her doing that as she was coming to call her.... she turn back.
Geet with new ambition she walk out.... "I will make alot of painting's and i will dedicate to you "
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days started passing she daily made a painting and Maan was the first one to see as she use to Mms her work, daily he use to call her when she was asleep and sleep with her breath
all paintings are by different artists i just use it NO COPYRIGHT INTENDED
LoVe

Main teri aankhoon mein rehta hoon
tujhe pata na chale
tere har pal mein gujra hoon
tujhe pata na chale
Drowning in your love

Kare toh phir kya kare
tere bin kaise jiye
aaaaankhoon mein pyaar liye
bolo kahaan kahaaaan phire
“Love is Eternal”

Khafa to hum bhi hai tum bhi ho
humein pata na chale
judai ka mujhe gham bhi hai
koi aisi khata na karein
Sea of LoVe

Sajni paas bulao na
ki dil aaj toota hai
aaj toota hai
sajan maan jao na
ki woh aaj rootha hai
aaj rootha hai
koi use aaj manaye na
the lost love

Jaane ja
dil tujhe hi chaaahe na
oooh ooo ooo ooo oooo oooo
Humein dil se bhulao na
yehi ab kehna hai
ab kehna hai
tum paas aaoona
aaoonnaaaaaaa
Maan: hmmmmm...in his sleep
Geet: who is there ?
Maan: open his eyes as he heard her voice... Self thought ..good morning my sleeping beauty... he cut the call..
Geet: pata nahi kon tha ..she hang the phone.... her cell vibrate.... " hope you have a nice day..."geet smiled text back.. " how is Maan? do take care of him ?" ..walked to freshen up... "she recollected how he came in that day to washroom and scared her . she blush... Maan i have hardly spend 15 days of my life with you but those days are my full life , i can spend my rest of life with your thoughts... sometime a single moment is enough & sometime the whole life goes to waste.... i got that single moment...she apply her sindoor ... " looked her self in mirror... "why i am so fresh today as if you are just around me .. " she felt strength in her self.
AT Maan place
Maan: your present make me complete .. i felt you so much today... he smiled at Adi.
ADI: sir
Maan: yes
ADI: is bhabi coming back...
Maan: no not yet.
ADI:Ok sir i have to go to the site can i go.
Maan: yes sure i will call the therapist.
ADI: see you then....
Maan: smiled..
ADI: looked at him in strange way... aaj huwa kya ha he is smiling again & again... went...
At Geet place:
Kumkum: good morning
Geet; good morning didi..she hug her,,
Kumkum: nice to see you so energetic Geet.
Geet:smiled back didi can i go to gallery
Kumkum yes sure i will ask your bhai to drop you.
Geet: thanks... her cell vibrate ... she looked at number it was Meera ... excuse me she walk to room ...self thought if she ask me to call Maan what i will do....she calm her voice "hello"
Meera: wah beta wah ..tum dono to bhool gai ho,,
GeeT: nahi didi...
Meera: neither you or Maan called us ...
Geet: looked at Maan pic placed next to her pillow... "oh didi actually we were"
Meera:" that saying is so true "son is a son until he get's a wife, daughter is daughter for rest of her life..call Maan i want to talk to him"
Geet: didi let me call him you please hold , she called at ADi number
Maan: saw her call he didnot picked
Maan:. text her what happen?
Geet: where is Maan? while talking to Meera
Maan: "what happen?"
Geet: "meera didi want to talk to Maan kya karo?" text ..she kept on talking to Meera asking about everyone at home ,weather etc
Maan: reply"ask her to call at his number , as he has gone to see site..."
Geet: read the message smile...to Meera .... "didi you call on his number he is not at home"
Meera: "ok bye"
Geet: relaxed ... text "thanks for saving me Aaj tou mein phass gai thi"text
Maan: :P send her text
Geet: :@ ok i am going to gallery see you..text
Maan: why so early?
Geet: aapas ki baat ha i want to give surprise my beloved hubby... see you...text... she kissed Maan pic kept it in her bag walk out... Kumkum saw her doing that as she was coming to call her.... she turn back.
Geet with new ambition she walk out.... "I will make alot of painting's and i will dedicate to you "
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days started passing she daily made a painting and Maan was the first one to see as she use to Mms her work, daily he use to call her when she was asleep and sleep with her breath
all paintings are by different artists i just use it NO COPYRIGHT INTENDED
LoVe
Main teri aankhoon mein rehta hoon
tujhe pata na chale
tere har pal mein gujra hoon
tujhe pata na chale
Drowning in your love
Kare toh phir kya kare
tere bin kaise jiye
aaaaankhoon mein pyaar liye
bolo kahaan kahaaaan phire
“Love is Eternal”
Khafa to hum bhi hai tum bhi ho
humein pata na chale
judai ka mujhe gham bhi hai
koi aisi khata na karein
Sea of LoVe
Sajni paas bulao na
ki dil aaj toota hai
aaj toota hai
sajan maan jao na
ki woh aaj rootha hai
aaj rootha hai
koi use aaj manaye na
the lost love

Jaane ja
dil tujhe hi chaaahe na
oooh ooo ooo ooo oooo oooo
Humein dil se bhulao na
yehi ab kehna hai
ab kehna hai
tum paas aaoona
aaoonnaaaaaaa
Enduring Love
Dere nare
dere na na re....
(Sajni paas bulao na
Sajan maan jaonaSajni paas bulao na)
Sajni paas bulao na
ki dil aaj toota hai
aaj toota haisajan maan jao na
dere na na re....
(Sajni paas bulao na
Sajan maan jaonaSajni paas bulao na)
Sajni paas bulao na
ki dil aaj toota hai
aaj toota haisajan maan jao na
on the 15th day of their separation, or staying away from each other , there was exhibition in Arjun gallery , Geet had take a corner for her work she had strictly placed a note not for sale on her work. since last two days she was not feeling well her head was heavy and she was feeling weak.
during the whole period Maan was in touch with her through Kumkum & Adi.they both knew each and everything about each other. thou they had not talk to each other as both of they thought they will not resist if they will speak & they will break .
Geet woke up in morning
Geet saw phone again next to her ... "uff yeh ha kon jo roaz call karta ha ... she said hello , Maan was awake he was just waiting for her to get up and to hear her voice ,before closing the call....
Geet: "please will you tell me today who you are? i told you many time... "she felt morning sickness she just ran to washroom .left the receiver. Maan could hear her throwing up ... "bus Geet bohat hogaya i am coming can't see you like this any more."
to be cont.....next will be last part.....
during the whole period Maan was in touch with her through Kumkum & Adi.they both knew each and everything about each other. thou they had not talk to each other as both of they thought they will not resist if they will speak & they will break .
Geet woke up in morning
Geet saw phone again next to her ... "uff yeh ha kon jo roaz call karta ha ... she said hello , Maan was awake he was just waiting for her to get up and to hear her voice ,before closing the call....
Geet: "please will you tell me today who you are? i told you many time... "she felt morning sickness she just ran to washroom .left the receiver. Maan could hear her throwing up ... "bus Geet bohat hogaya i am coming can't see you like this any more."
to be cont.....next will be last part.....
superb update dear!!!!!
ReplyDeletereally waiting to know what is going to happen now
awesome part...u r goin to end this ff too..i am going to cry now........
ReplyDeletebut simply fabulous
keep writing
love u and ur ff
reva
wowwwwwwwwww beautiful update, pics bohat pyari thi. aw Geet is not feeling well. do update soon and plz plz plz dont end it plz
ReplyDeleteWow amazing update.. luved the pics... wonder whts goin to happen now....continue soon
ReplyDeleteNice update....seems like gud news is on the way....continue soon
ReplyDeleteBeautiful part!!!!
ReplyDeleteawww.....Geet is expecting:)
wonderful update!!!
loved it.
aww geet pregnant ..............maan coming to take his lady love wowow awesome ..nadiya next part long please
ReplyDeleteawesome part
ReplyDeleteis geet expecting???
cyum321
Superb part..... loved it
ReplyDeleteXXXYYYZZZ
awesome update ....
ReplyDeleteluved it ...
continue soon ...
luv ..
angel ...
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee superbbbbbbbb naddiya keep it up
ReplyDeletedo continue soon wajiha
hey loved it...waiting for them to b together...u r ending this ff...me sad :(...
ReplyDeletepoojaa
great part......loved reading it.
ReplyDeletewow great part
ReplyDeleteplz continue soon
Prerna1
awesome dear.... me waiting for more finally they are going to meet i think....okies are we expecting any good newz from Geet...
ReplyDeleteaarthi
awesomeeeeeeeeee
ReplyDeleteluved itttttttttttt
n wowwwwwww hope maan meets geet at d allery plzzzzzzzzzz
Your FF is absolutely amazing! You are such a great writer! The update was awesome. Can't believe you are ending it though :(
ReplyDeleteawesome update Naddiya
ReplyDeleteloved it
cont soon
hey nice update dear...........
ReplyDeleteso daily maan made call to geet at morning.........it was choooooooo sweet n i think geet is preg:-) am i right.........
looking fwd............
Hey Naddiya,
ReplyDeleteLoved the update. Ph. is their best friend now :-)
Meera does not know anything about them. It is safe to play the Game.
Geet Ur Surprise is not a surprise dear.
Yeah, Maan is going to Geet
Continue Soon.
hiiiiii
ReplyDeleteawesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
yayyyyy maan is going 2 get his geet back
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
ARMAANKSGFAN
lovely update....
ReplyDeletehey
ReplyDeletegr8 part..
cont.soon
awesome!
ReplyDeletejust read the remaining parts!....
maan and geet are away from each other but still they are so close!
continue soon!
-SWEET SCORPIO
Superb update..........
ReplyDeleteawesome update
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