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Despair 46

Maan : my sleeping beauty is asleep that why her cell is switched off. he called at her number as soon as he got up. Geet madam here i come... he got you he stretch his legs... "i will walk to you without this support till then you  have to wait for me.." he just freshen up .walk out of cottage.
Adi: was sleeping on chair out side in veranda . he was covering him self with blanket.
Maan: just smiled ... "loved your sincerity Adi"  he went in make coffee & waked Adi
ADI: Maa sona do
Maan: i am not Maa i am Maan. he shake him
ADI: Maa what happen to your voice?
Maan: ADI shouted
ADI: oh oh SIR aap he try to find his glasses.
Maan: what are you doing here in such cold
ADI: Sir how could i leave you alone. i came but the door was closed so i slept here.
Maan: yeh lo... he offer him coffee
ADI: for me looked at him in shocked
Maan: yes
ADI: if i sleep here daily you will daily give me bed ... paused
Maan: looked at him in anger.
ADI: Sir i try Geet bhabi cell many time but it was switched off.
Maan: it was open you just trace her number.
ADI: ok sir..he was about to get up.
Maan: wait call DR & ask him to send his therapies, as now i want to walk to her.
ADI: you will not go today
Maan  no we will just be in touch with her movement but stay away.
ADI:oh now you will
Maan:smiled yes lets see for how long she will stay away from everyone of us.
ADI: sir let me trace her where abouts.
Maan: call DR first..
ADI: smiled .... LOVE..
Maan: what?
ADI: kuch nai.
Maan: listen you don't tell anyone about this. & if she call's you tell i am busy in new project ...
ADI: smiled new project
Maan: hmm
ADI: Therapy..he jump out of the lawn chair call DR.
Maan: ask to trace the place.


AT GEET PLACE
Geet: woke up  she switched on cell ,"He has so much ego he can't sms me " she closed again.
Kumkum :knocked in..
Geet: hi
Kumkum how are you?
Geet:  fine.
Kumkum: my daughter told me that you didnot slept the whole night.
Geet: i did
Kumkum: your eyes are telling  how much you slept
Geet: smiled
Kumkum:Geet if you don't mind can i ask you one question
Geet; jee sure why i will mind
Kumkum: ok i will first you freshen up have a proper breakfast.
Geet: ok..
Kumkum walk out.
Geet: what she want to ask? she walk to washroom....looked her self in mirror her eyes was red. 

AT Maan place
ADI: she is in Simla 
Maan: get the passenger list we will find out.
ADI how?
Maan: see there is their contact number call & ask have you seen a girl .
ADI: wah sir you are ...
Maan: showed him eyes,
ADI: called few number. everyone said they don't remember.  ADI called Kumkum home number.

Kumkum: hello
ADI: hi
Kumkum: HI
ADI: kya aap kal he took bus number see Simla aai ha 
Kumkum: yes 
ADI: kya aap ka na kaise akele larki ko dekha .
Kumkum: who are you ...? 
ADI: looked at Maan"sir i think we found her" he gave phone to Maan.
Maan: hi i am Maan Singh Khurana Geet's husband i think my wife is there.
Kumkum: hmmm are you Meera 's cousin, 
Maan: yes 
Kumkum: oh i have heard your name so many time from Meera.
Maan: looked at ADI.. made Crack gesture.
ADI: kya
Maan: didi is Geet there
Kumkum: Oh tou tume ho woh ., XXX XXX XXx  
Maan: kept away the cell from him 
Kumkm: are you there
Maan: JEE
Kumkum: ha  she is here
Maan: took a deep breather he was relax.. he showed thumb up.
Kumkum: how you find her & this number.
Maan: told her the whole story
Kumkum: ok now what you want come & take your wife.
Maan: i will not come you keep her with you till i am fine..he told kumkum all of his plan.
Kumkum: but this will make her more sad.
Maan:didi kuch din ,please
Kumkum: she can stay in my home for every but i am concern about her , last night she had fever.
Maan: didi if i will come right a way then i will hurt her again  , i want to be fine for her .
Kumkum: ok tell me what should i do?
Maan: just take care of her & tell me about her.& please dont tell  Meera didi.
Kumkum: ok bye she is coming will call you after sometime
Maan heard Geet voice as she was calling didi.
Kumkum: closed the call"i am here "
Geet; yes didi ask? 
kumkum : kuch nai
Geet: didi ask ...
Kumkum: cup her face "quickly have breakfast then we will go for shopping"
Geet: shopping
Kumkum: yes will you wear this clothes the whole day.
Geet: you get for me..
Kumkum: no you will come with me.
Geet: had switched on her cell she was expecting call from him .
Kumkum: saw she was looking at her cell , she smiled. "aara all men are alike they take no time to forget woman"
Geet: but My Maan is not like that. it was slip of tongue....
Kumkum smiled ..as it was confirm she was Maan's wife.
Geet: Oh i wanted to say My Man.
Kumkum. looked at her face "why are you putting sindoor ? as you said you don't want to stay with him"
Geet: i feel secure , & i am still his wife...
Kumkum: looked her again switching on cell . "why don't you calll your self"
Geet: i was just checking charge ha ka  nai lets go for shopping.
Kumkum smiled wait let me bring my purse.. she walk to her room
Geet: to got her purse as she walked to living room the phone rang..Geet looked around no one was there,she picked up the phone."hello  with scary voice"
Maan: hold his breath he just kissed her through phone & cut call..
Kumkum: who was there?
Geet; someone heard me & cut call.
Kumkum: wrong number hoga..lets go..
Geet: again switched on cell , she waited for sometime ..self talk"last night he was calling again & again why not now, hope he is fine.."   she got scared.
Kumkum: drag her with her from when mall to other for 2 hours the roam here & there. 
Geet wanted to check but she didnot as she couldn't hide from Kumkum sharp eyes & she didnot want her to make fun of her.
As they reached home Geet got some space she .... self thought "may be Maan found where i am he is coming,that why he didn't called. I should ask ADI, she sms ADI how is Maan?

AT Maan Place 
ADI: was watching Maan having therapy ... as they had arrange Dr ..his cell peep. he read & smiled ..
ADI: sir
Maan: read  replied "busy in new project"

Geet; read She just couldn't believe her eyes ...so that was your LoVe Mr Maan...she just closed cell hide her 
face in pillow.." i will not think of you or show concern from now  you carry on with your new project" 
Pass Rehna
Dhoor Ha Jana
Dhoor Ha Jakhar
Yaadein
Sub Mausum Hai Pyar Kai
Jana
to be con't if you all like it

25 comments:

  1. loved it naadiya n sorry if u have felt bad for that day plz lets forget all n start freshly plzzzzzzzzz

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  2. awesome...........

    loving it.

    cyum321

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  3. so awesome...
    love geet and maan.....their love is simply heavenly...
    its rare to witness such love..
    keep writing
    love u and ur ff

    reva

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  4. awesome dear!!!!!!!!!
    loving it...!

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  5. REALLY BEAUTIFUL UPDATE NADIYA
    ATLEAST MAAN KNEW WHR GEET IZZ

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  6. Awesome update... loved it

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  7. LOVE THE AANKH-MICHOLI............ PEHLE GEET MAAN KO PYAR KA EHSAAS KERWA RAHI THI NOW ITS MAAN......ITS GOOD TO KNOW THAT MAAN WANT TO FOLLOW HIS REGULAR THERAPIES SO HE WANT TO GIVE SURPRISE TO HIS SLEEPING BEAUTY.........LOVED THE UPDATE

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  8. very happy that maan has found her, enjoying their hide&seek game...continue soon, thanks for the pm :-)

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  9. aww soo sweet maan find out where is geet and he talk with kumkum he have some plan for geet he dont want to hurt her again so sweet i think he want to become fit first then dilwale apni dulhaniya ko lene jayenge wowow awesome part dear thanks a lot for pm

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  10. Wow loved it :) do continue soon

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  11. loved the update...continue soon

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  12. so sweet of maan he found geet but still he want to be normal as before meeting his geet.
    great update
    loved it

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  13. beautiful... sweet..touchin ;)

    hemvb

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  14. lovely update....

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  15. hey
    gr8 part..
    hope maaneet meets sooon..
    cont,sooon

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  16. hey hi naddiya its wajiha naddiya its awesome update with full of emotions emotions are fully expressed plzz do continue soon

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  17. what love they have for each other
    wow maan to be fit & fine because of
    her lovely update
    pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnn
    thank yu so much dear

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  18. Hey Naddiya,
    Liked the update though it was a bit sad
    Adi is such a good friend.
    Geet is still hurting Maan. U need to be with her
    Continue soon

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  19. hey, great part dear!!!!
    im so happy that you continue!!!!
    i love allllll your ff's!!!!!
    plzzzzzzzz continue soon dear!!!!!
    love you!!!!!
    shimmerr

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  20. beautiful update Naddiya
    loved it but it was so touchy...
    maan was to quick to find out where geet was
    cont soon

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  21. heyyyyyyy awesomeeeeeee naddiya
    luved itttttt
    hopefully maan recovers fast n geet tries 2 adjust with kumkum family

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  22. hey dear lovely update.. wow maan wnts to get cured for geet.. happy tht he found her... kumkum is really nice.. continue soon

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  23. wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! maan found geet n playing a game with geet........hmm...........
    interesting........i loved it.......
    looking fwd..........

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  24. awesome update .. loved it ...

    continue soon ...

    luv...

    angel ....

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  25. awwww dear..that was awesome part..loved it to the core.

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