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ff despair part 17

middle of night
Geet: woke up with a jerk she had a bad dream .."Papa shouted "
Maan: Geet relax he got up as she was sitting & crying
Geet: papa..shake him
Maan: Geet  drink water
Geet: you said he will be fine then why?
Maan: Geet i am not dr ...removed her curls from her face
Geet:"nahi" she started crying
Maan:"you are very strong i know that"  hug her
Geet: i am not
Maan: whisper "few things are not in our hand we are help less"
Geet: but why me?
Maan: Geet see you are not alone i am with you to look after you ..dadi is here ,rest all  think of those who dont have any one...
Geet: suddenly felt embarrassed as she was hugging him tightly ,with her tears all his shirt was wet..."sorry"
Maan: wiped her tears .why sorry we are friend's yar?
Geet:jee
Maan: it is 3 you rest made her lie down again
Geet: aap ja kar sojai
Maan: i slept here
Geet: blushed ...
Maan: don't think .close your eyes placed his hand on her forehead ...
Geet: looked at him
Maan:"you a are bit warm"
Geet: i am fine
Maan: let me get thermometer to check
Geet: go to sleep i am fine ..hold his hand
both felt strange at their place....


Usha Nadkarni














(beeji is this lady she will sort those 3 sisters
Maan: Adi has gone there ..i hope so she will come
Geet: i wish she come
Maan: let me check( he got up switch on lamp) ...he called to Adi
Geet: it is 3 why are you calling? took cell
Maan: you said you want to meet her..
Geet: but see time
Maan: hmmm... sorry
Geet: ajeeb mushkil ha
Maan: hide his smile
Geet: turn on other side... if beeji come here i will be fine....she thought
Maan: on other hand thinking "if she will come , Geet will not need me"
Geet: slept
Maan:"i can't share my friend my doll.." looked at her sleeping peacefully holding his cell in her hand "you ask me any thing i will do meri guriya" pat her cheek .

At brij place.. Lucknow  Romeo as brij friend

Brij : so mr Handa you sold your daughter... he had a evil laughter
Romeo : "how you know he sold her " both watching tv
Brij:"how he suddenly pay me ? he must have sold her "
Romeo: saw his red eyes he was very angry ..."brij listen to me forget her she is married now"
Brij: had a laughter again" why i leave her ?she had insulted me in front of the whole neighborhood "
Romeo:  "you will get 100 time better girl than her"
Brij :"why are you taking their side, grab his collar"
Romeo:" i was find her for you ,but now i will not .." push him away
Brij: i will see you.. you are impress with his money
Romeo: i am still a human being , not a selfish mammal like you, you had made them suffer alot..
Brij: i will see you.. got more angry
Romeo: i am not scared of you ... walk out of his home.

At Delhi.in morning
nt: walked in mansion ..she was rubbing her eyes...
Meera: surprised to see her "are you ok?"
nt: i came here to help you bhabi ..
Meera: shocked ..thinking she never help me in Mumbai ..."i am done"
nt: did you sleep with Geet?..
Meera: looked at her face... didnot reply.
nt: should i go & check her ...
Meera: she is asleep,
nt: till now
Meera: it is 7
nt: phir bhi
Meera: is Sasha & Tasha awake
nt: yes they are getting ready to get mama from airport
Meera: mama shocked
nt :yes she is coming.
Meera: bas un kai kaami thi ...
nt: she said it does not look nice.
Meera: ok go tell Dadi...
nt:walked out
Meera: my family is really too much walked to Geet room knocked at her door
Maan: got up "who is it ?"
Meera: me
Maan: open kya huwa
Meera:how is she ?looked at her sleeping

Maan: yes
Meera: now you go from here ...
Maan: why?
Meera:"why you are making scene ?" she closed door push him to his room
Maan: wait let me
Meera: kya let me
Maan: took his cell from her hand ... removed her hairs from her face.
Geet: kya huwa ... open eyes
Maan: nothing
Meera:  sit next to her "Maan go from here & close door"
Maan: why?
Meera: it does not look nice why you want people to talk about you.
Maan: let them walked to his room in anger.
Geet: kya huwa didi
Meera: why don't you tell him ? may be he listen you...
Geet: "I"shy
Meera : yes you , haar waqt zidd karta ha
Geet: huwa kya ha ..feel shy
Meera: guest are here ..you get ready walked out
Geet: got up fixed her duppata.walked to washroom  freshen up
when she got out of her room she saw dadi sitting in room with Dev Mom
Sheeba Chadha
(she is  their mom .....crazy daughters )
Geet: Greeted them
Dadi: come here beta ..
Geet: Jee
Dadi: apply this ..gave her a small box
Geet: felt shy looked at her
Dadi: i will ask him if you don't want to apply your self
Geet: i will
Dadi smiled
Geet: apply in her maang
nt: aunty does this mean she is married .."her face
Dadi: yes beta
Geet: felt more shy as she saw Maan staring at her
Meera: we all have to go to the ..paused
Geet: heart skip a heart beat.. with tear eyes she looked at Maan
 
he looked at her

Dadi: hold her hand
Ved:didi... came & hug her "i missed you Mama did not let me come to you yesterday "
Geet: why?
Tanu: she said you are sick...
Geet: i am fine
Meera: ok you both come with your didi & mamoo
Geet: looked at Maan who came closed to her.."beeji"
Maan: she will come at the...paused... (sorry i dont know much abt hindu funeral ceremony)
Geet: jee
Maan: grab her hand ..& walked out of the lounge ... "tanu & ved come fast"

Geet: "why you are ?"
Maan: looked at her as they reached car " what ?"

Covered her head
Maan: "i donot care that you know very well now " closed the door
Geet: looked out saw dev mom talking with her daughters all looking at them
Ved: didi
Geet: jee
Ved: i am with you
Geet: smiled ....
Maan: reversed car


Sasha: what we are doing here?
Tasha: crying ...hehehe
devMom: you have to create miss understanding between them .do din ka pyar ha yeh....
Sasha: how?
nt: i will tell you...
to be cont... wrong timing busy in watching Munda chaanta ;)
pictures by Dimple Kaur

16 comments:

  1. oh my god wat kind of mom she is ...

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  2. hey naddiya superb work
    and dev's mom yuk hate her hehehe
    well excellent update
    thanks for pm
    do continue soon :)

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  3. wow Thats Awesome.......
    Loved it.......
    Loved the Pics sooooooooooo much.....
    wow Love the cast U chose for both Beeji and DevMom......
    They perfectly suit the characters.....
    Eagerly waiting for the next part.....
    Pls Update Sooooooooon........

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  4. Awesome!!!
    Loved the update!
    I love the characters you've picked up for beeji's and Dev's mom role. I think you're planning to bring back Brij.
    Those three sisters are really crazy, ab unki mom bhi aa gayi :(

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  5. hey
    gr8 part..
    cont.sooon

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  6. when a yu gonner kick those three evil & there mother i hope benji comes awesome update pls cont soonnnn thanks pm

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  7. Amazing NAddiya...

    Loving it to the core!!!

    Continue soon!!!!

    Love

    Mina

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  8. awesome update!!!
    cant wait for the next part!!!
    pls cont.soon!!

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  9. wowwwwwwww nadiya awesome yaar every new update make me want more(hehehehehe)

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  10. wow all the updates wer mindblowing....

    superbbb workkkkk.....

    loved it

    keep writing.......

    reva

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  11. hey nice update too gud
    plz continue soon
    n thanks for PM
    niharika

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  12. Shaila(bluedreamz953)November 9, 2010 at 11:22 PM

    Hey Naddiya!!
    Loved the update yaar!

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  13. that was awesome
    plz continue soon

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  14. nice update naddiya
    hope beegi come soon to support geet n throw out those evil sisters
    they r just getting on my nerves

    shining_moon

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  15. wow naddiya nice update
    I m just loving this one
    ughh this brij.....want maan to beat the hell out of him
    n hope beeji comes soon n support geet n throw these evil sis out of the house
    thanks for the pm n update soon

    shining_moon

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  16. hy naddiya greatttttttttttttttttttttttt update yaar.
    love the way maan and his family care of geet. waiting for next update plzzzzzzzzzzzzz conti soon

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