Pages

Welcome to my imaginary world

despair 18

Sorry after the slap i was not in a mood to type ... thx a ton for support...i am having a serious problem  i can't add part in one post ..it is showing me some error.... i lost my updated once... till it is fix read here... comment any where....
They all reached to the ground
Maan: be strong Geet keep your promise.. hold her hand as he stop parked car
Geet: looked at him..with teary eyes
Meera: open door "come Geet"
Geet: turn back & looked at Maan
Maan: didi wait i will come.. he walk to the other side...
Meera: looked at them...
Geet: didi
Maan: aao... gave her his hand
Geet: where is Beeji
Maan: Adi will bring her don't you worry
Geet: walked to dadi .... stand in between Maan & dadi...
Tasha: is  he her husband or body guard .. always clue to her
Sasha: naya naya pyar ha.. hit her with her elbow
dev mom: shhhh be serious
nt: i am jealous of this Geet .
A voice from behind
Beeji : why you are jealous of my daughter ....?
nt: who are you? looked her in shocked
Beeji: she is my daughter... she walked to  Geet
Geet: looked at her ... she just feel too weak in her knees she just hug her ...& cry
Maan: gave her hand in beeji hand ..."i try to look after her but not like you ..sorry"
Geet: looked at Maan..who was with fingers saying don't cry....
Beeji : looked at Geet forehead looked her in bit surprised  ...didn't asked
they called Family member to come forward to  proceed the funeral
oldMan: i am his brother walk from behind...
Geet: looked at Maan who was ready to go...
Beeji : geet why he is here
Geet: beeji do something as she was scared if he get angry again
Beeji: wait...
Maan: closed his fist as he was very angry to see him here...
Beeji: very loud " he had left one daughter behind , he didn't had any sibling or blood relative ..so it is his son in law right to proceed  the formalities "...looked in anger at oldman
Maan: chalo mera saath

he is old man
Uday Tikekar
He looked at Beeji in anger murur" from where she had come i thought she was dead"
DevMom: "who is she?"
OldMan: "she is part of their family"
Dev mom: " dekti hn iss ko bhi mein"
Old man: she is very loyal to Handa
Devmom: money can  paused
they saw Maan walking with Geet to the body & doing the rituals..

 Maan: looked at geet who was stand with closed eyes ...
Beeji: she is strong beta..pat Maan shoulder
Maan: yes indeed...
Beeji:why he is here? pointed at oldman
Maan: will tell you all later. you come with me before he start any drama.. lets take her home
Beeji: he will not do any thing in front of me.
Maan: dadi come with me .... he made dadi sit at front seat.. Geet behind him..beeji & kids
Ved: didi
Geet: jee
Ved: if that day Mamoo had died, we would have dont same
Geet: chup ...
Ved: sorry looked at Geet she was angry
Maan: looked at her ...in back view mirror
Geet: ignore him
Dadi: he was just like my own son,
Beeji : i know
Dadi: why he didnot mail me before?
Beeji:bus he & his rules , he said he will never take help from others in raising his daughters.
Dadi: i am happy ,i have his aakhri nishani as  my grand bahu..
Beeji looked at Geet .. who blushed .
Ved: what is bahu , who is your bahu?
Tanu : didi na
Ved: thinking dadi bahu mean's
Tanu: Mamoo wife
Ved: Dadi who is mamoo wife ? ufff i am confused
Dadi: your didi is mamoo wife...
Tanu : didi your prince is Mamoo
Geet: blushed where to hide her self...
Beeji: yes beta ... your didi was a princess on day  a your mamoo came as a prince & took her with him ..
Tanu : to his palace as they reached home...
Ved: tell me more
Beeji : more at night. they walk to room
Maan &Geet  followed them
Maan: princess can i have a cup of coffee in my library please...
Geet: shyly looked at him ..." jee i will send"
Maan: i want you to bring.. he walked to the library..
Geet: uff kya mushkal ha ..

nt : oh we are so sorry .. hug her
Geet: we could not do any thing , or it was late..
Sasha: we are your sisters don't worry
Geet: thx
nt: come with us ...
Geet: give me five mins i will join you...
Sasha: do you have any work ...
Geet: yes .. free her hand from nt's  walked in
nt: she is very obedient ..
Sasha: now what? saw their Mom talking to Meera..
Tasha: listen girls  Bro is saying we all should go back with him...
Sasha: why?
nt: "i will see... how he take us back?"

Geet: made coffee... walked with the cup to library as no one was in lounge.... she took a deep breath...knocked
Maan: it is open
Geet: yeh aap ki coffee.. kept it on table
Maan: looked at her "thx"
Geet: can i go
Maan : no
Geet: please  looked at her both paintings
Maan: what is this why you wrote every thing....showed her note book
Geet: you said to write imp. every thing was imp for me..
Maan : and this ....
Geet; what ? try to see
Maan: closed it "why i show you ?you wanted to go "
Geet: looked at him smiled ..

she was about to go they heard foot steps out side the door
Maan: some one is coming... stopped her hide behind curtain

Geet: what?
Maan: sshhhh...
they heard 3 sisters
nt: she is not here
sasha: she must be in her room
tasha: look at that painting ... try to pick it up
Maan: whisper i will not leave her ....
Geet: jana da...
Maan: you stay here i will ...
Geet: hold his arm nai leave it...
VED: "what are you doing here massi ? you are not allowed here"
Sasha: you again call us massi
Tanu :massi ko massi na bola to kya bola...
Sasha: wait i will tell you
Tanu : 3 massi .. ran out
they followed her
Ved: closed door you can come out prince & princess ....
Both blushed ....how he knew we are here... by eyes asked each other...
Maan: woh mein
Ved: chori bhi aur.... had a laughter..
to be cont.....

17 comments:

  1. superb update yaar..ved and tanu so so cute ......

    ReplyDelete
  2. Loved it :)
    Beeji aa gayi, Yay :)

    ReplyDelete
  3. aww i loked teh whole curtain moment

    ReplyDelete
  4. Shaila(bluedreamz953)November 11, 2010 at 9:57 AM

    Haha..this was so cute
    Thanks

    ReplyDelete
  5. awesome work naddiya
    kids are shooo sweet
    and bieeji character is awesome
    she will help geet like the lady bold and brave she can fight for geet against 3 sisters and there mom
    love the update
    thanks for pm naddiya
    continue soon

    ReplyDelete
  6. that was so sweet
    fianlly beeji has come
    plz continue soon and update your other ffs too plz

    ReplyDelete
  7. awsome update naddiya
    kids are superb bieji character is also awesome such a brave and bold lady she can help geet in fight against her uncle 3 sisters and there mom
    loved the update thanks for pm
    continue soon:)

    ReplyDelete
  8. hey
    gr8 part..
    cont.sooon

    ReplyDelete
  9. i love each part i wish there another part can read how amazing its pls cont soonnnnnnn thanks pm

    ReplyDelete
  10. i love each parts i wish there another update can read because amazing pls cont soonnnnnnn thanks pm

    ReplyDelete
  11. i love each parts pls cont soonnnnnnn thanks pm

    ReplyDelete
  12. Fabulous Naddiya...

    Loved it...

    Prince & Princess.... adorable...:)

    Continue soooooonnnn.....

    ReplyDelete
  13. heyyyyyyyyy

    Fabulousssssss update!

    i love this little kid! such emotional and excellent update!

    plzz update soomnn

    ReplyDelete
  14. wow...
    u amaze me with each wonderful update of urs....
    great update...

    i hate nt, sasha and tasha ....and ofcouse their mom....
    remove all these villain...
    dont want them to craete any misunderstanding between maneet......

    hope to see more maneet moments....
    keep writing

    reva

    ReplyDelete
  15. awesome work naddiya
    lovly update n ved are so cute I eagerly waiting to see the next what that three chudil n there mom create problem in maaneet n I would like to see when maan will come to knw this he will surely kick them out direct delhi to mumbai
    kids are shooo sweet specialy last part
    and bieeji is awesome
    she will help geet like the lady bold and brave she can fight for geet against 3 sisters and there mom
    love the update
    thanks for pm naddiya
    continue soon
    pls update today it is ok with short one but pls update

    love u

    ReplyDelete
  16. Cuteeee!!!
    Loveee Ved and Tanu!!!

    ReplyDelete