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Maan: we will have Dua Maan Singh khurana bet
Geet: choked as he said ...
Meera: how you are that sure?
Maan: My heart... placed his hand on his heart
Dadi: yeh bilkul pagal hogya ha
Maan: looked at dadi pat Geet back
Geet: aap bhi na
Maan:kya mein bhi na...
Geet: Crazy... walked to Meera
Maan smiled

Dadi: if we will have a daughter i will be embarrassed
Maan : you are a lady why you should be embarrassed ?
Dadi: but your .. paused
Maan: bus Dadi.. i never thought you have think of 18th century
Dadi: Maan
Maan: meri Dua ... said loud & walked to his room
Dadi: whats wrong with him?
Meera: that what i was saying to you ? he is not that Maan any more ..
Geet: blushed as she knew he is changed because of her.. she finished her breakfast walk to room Maan was working on his laptop
Maan: did you had breakfast?
Geet : ha
Maan: Looked at her "why you are down" hold her hand
Geet: what dadi will think i have changed you?
Maan: any doubt .. pull her
Geet: you & your arguments ... ufff kahan mein ..paused
Maan: what? bolo bolo
Geet:"kuch nai" got up
Maan:smiled..
Geet: "lets go"
Maan: "yes " both walk out
Meera:Ready
Geet: yes
Dadi: where are you going?
Maan: suspense khatam karna...
Dadi: "what do you mean?"
Maan: " DUA Or.."
Dadi: ultrasound
Maan: yes that day DR asked me but ... paused as every thing changed after that...
Dadi: "you bet if i win then"
Maan: thinking
Geet: who was sitting & listening"please whats wrong with you?"
Maan: i will win as My heart say...
Dadi: if i win you will listen what i will say?
Maan: looked at her... "Dua,Dua ,Dua"
Dadi: say yes or no
Maan: Hug dadi"trust me Dua ha"
Geet: uff stop it is is my home no fighting here...
Maan: placed his finger on his lips...
Dadi: Maan.. if i win you will listen me...
Maan: Dua dadi Dua Maan kia Dua
Meera had a laughter
Geet: uff babaji twins ho dadi pota dono happy ... chalo Meera let them fight...
Maan: oh Geet , i didnot look for twin's bedroom interior
( i lost those pictures this is lounge..........Dadi room)


Geet:Maan chup
Maan: jee Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana
Geet: Meera please check him he is really not fine behaving like a .....as everyone walked out "
Dadi: drop me at my friend house Maan
Maan: dadi then you will say i cheat?
Dadi: "Meera is there to tell me truth..."
Meera smiled
Maan drop her to her friend home they all went to hospital
Meera: you both sit here i will call you in 5 mins
Maan: ok
Geet: whats wrong with you?
Maan: what i did now? looked at her with baby face... hold her hands
Geet: if dadi win's then
Maan: Geet my heart ...

Geet: "you & your logics"
Maan:took her both hands in his .."i will win"

Meera: come you both...both walked in
at Delhi
nt: in hospital "why don't you ask Dr what is wrong with me?"
dev: DR said you have to stay here for few more days
nt: pir hum ko huwa kya ha
dev: go & ask Dr don't eat my brain
nt : hum aap ki
dev: you are no more my ...
nt : started crying..
dev: walked out
nt: wipe her tears i will see you Geet
At Agra
Meera: oh....
Maan: what happen tell me quickly..holding Geet hand
Meera: i am sorry Maan
Geet: i told you not to bet..
Maan: Meera: you have n't check properly
Meera: poor Maan
Maan: will you tell me or not
Meera: let me tell dadi first she dial
Geet: i warn you
Maan: my heart can't be wrong... hold his head
Meera: dadi i am sorry you lost the bet .... yahan per Maan kai Dua ha ...
Maan: Hug Geet See i told you...Meri Dua ... humari Dua ....

Geet: but how?
Maan:looked at her see ... my heart is always right
to be cont...............
pictures by Dimple Kaur
Maan: we will have Dua Maan Singh khurana bet
Geet: choked as he said ...
Meera: how you are that sure?
Maan: My heart... placed his hand on his heart
Dadi: yeh bilkul pagal hogya ha
Maan: looked at dadi pat Geet back
Geet: aap bhi na
Maan:kya mein bhi na...
Geet: Crazy... walked to Meera
Maan smiled
Dadi: if we will have a daughter i will be embarrassed
Maan : you are a lady why you should be embarrassed ?
Dadi: but your .. paused
Maan: bus Dadi.. i never thought you have think of 18th century
Dadi: Maan
Maan: meri Dua ... said loud & walked to his room
Dadi: whats wrong with him?
Meera: that what i was saying to you ? he is not that Maan any more ..
Geet: blushed as she knew he is changed because of her.. she finished her breakfast walk to room Maan was working on his laptop
Maan: did you had breakfast?
Geet : ha
Maan: Looked at her "why you are down" hold her hand
Geet: what dadi will think i have changed you?
Maan: any doubt .. pull her
Geet: you & your arguments ... ufff kahan mein ..paused
Maan: what? bolo bolo
Geet:"kuch nai" got up
Maan:smiled..
Geet: "lets go"
Maan: "yes " both walk out
Meera:Ready
Geet: yes
Dadi: where are you going?
Maan: suspense khatam karna...
Dadi: "what do you mean?"
Maan: " DUA Or.."
Dadi: ultrasound
Maan: yes that day DR asked me but ... paused as every thing changed after that...
Dadi: "you bet if i win then"
Maan: thinking
Geet: who was sitting & listening"please whats wrong with you?"
Maan: i will win as My heart say...
Dadi: if i win you will listen what i will say?
Maan: looked at her... "Dua,Dua ,Dua"
Dadi: say yes or no
Maan: Hug dadi"trust me Dua ha"
Geet: uff stop it is is my home no fighting here...
Maan: placed his finger on his lips...
Dadi: Maan.. if i win you will listen me...
Maan: Dua dadi Dua Maan kia Dua
Meera had a laughter
Geet: uff babaji twins ho dadi pota dono happy ... chalo Meera let them fight...
Maan: oh Geet , i didnot look for twin's bedroom interior
( i lost those pictures this is lounge..........Dadi room)
Geet:Maan chup
Maan: jee Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana
Geet: Meera please check him he is really not fine behaving like a .....as everyone walked out "
Dadi: drop me at my friend house Maan
Maan: dadi then you will say i cheat?
Dadi: "Meera is there to tell me truth..."
Meera smiled
Maan drop her to her friend home they all went to hospital
Meera: you both sit here i will call you in 5 mins
Maan: ok
Geet: whats wrong with you?
Maan: what i did now? looked at her with baby face... hold her hands
Geet: if dadi win's then
Maan: Geet my heart ...
Geet: "you & your logics"
Maan:took her both hands in his .."i will win"
Meera: come you both...both walked in
at Delhi
nt: in hospital "why don't you ask Dr what is wrong with me?"
dev: DR said you have to stay here for few more days
nt: pir hum ko huwa kya ha
dev: go & ask Dr don't eat my brain
nt : hum aap ki
dev: you are no more my ...
nt : started crying..
dev: walked out
nt: wipe her tears i will see you Geet
At Agra
Meera: oh....
Maan: what happen tell me quickly..holding Geet hand
Meera: i am sorry Maan
Geet: i told you not to bet..
Maan: Meera: you have n't check properly
Meera: poor Maan
Maan: will you tell me or not
Meera: let me tell dadi first she dial
Geet: i warn you
Maan: my heart can't be wrong... hold his head
Meera: dadi i am sorry you lost the bet .... yahan per Maan kai Dua ha ...
Maan: Hug Geet See i told you...Meri Dua ... humari Dua ....
Geet: but how?
Maan:looked at her see ... my heart is always right
to be cont...............
pictures by Dimple Kaur

awesome naddiya
ReplyDeleteexcellent update happy that dadima loses bet hehehehe
thanks for pm love you do continue soon :)
awsome yaar ..dua dua dua part is so so good ..i laughed my head out...
ReplyDeleteThats Lovely Dear......
ReplyDeleteLoved it soooooooooooooooo much......
OMG Loved the way Maan argued with Daadi and kept on saying Maan ki Dua...........
Daadi must be fully shocked seeing a lot of change in Maan........
wow so finally Maan won...
Pls Update Soooooooooon.......
Lovely :)
ReplyDeleteMaan ki dua :)
That was a sweet update!
Hope Dadi doesn't get hyper that its a girl and not a boy!
hey
ReplyDeletegr8 part..
maam ki Dua..
cont.soon
wow how amazing that Maan new that she i'll have baby girl i dont know what she i'll do dadima i hope she doesn't turn negative marvelous update my dear pls cont soon thanks pm
ReplyDeletelovely update...do continue ..we wana more...
ReplyDeleteamazing update!!!
ReplyDeletemaan is so sweet yaar!!
how will dadi react??
cant wait for the next part!!
pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM
totally awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletethat was so good
ReplyDeletei love the name maan ki dua
plz continue soon
very nyc ... thanks for pm me links
ReplyDeletewow that was so awesome
ReplyDeletemaan won yuppy..........
the name suggested by maan is very nice..so pure...loved it
plz update the next part soon
shining_moon
hi love ur ff plz update soon it would be good if they have twins maan kush geet kuch and dadi kush
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