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Early next morning
Geet woke up with rain noise as it was making melodious sound as hitting the wooden roof top of the cottage . she try to get up but could not as Maan was hugging her tightly in his arms...whisper " when you love me so much why don't you admit." removed his hairs from his fore head. slight kissed his forehead.. "i will win you will fall in love once again with me." removed his hand from her back placed pillow... covered him properly .walked to washroom to freshen up.
She walk on her toe tip to kitchen made coffee for her grab her canvas paints walk to the veranda she turn back could see Maan sleeping peacefully.


Geet : arranged her canvas and started painting. the sound of breeze & wind chimes  made her smile "Maan i will gift you this just for you for the first time" she didnot released for how long she painted . as she was so much absorb. she many time turn back and saw Maan sleeping Geet smiled "my kuchi baby is so relaxed he is asleep."as rain had stopped she just pull her stand in lawn.
It was 9 Maan woke up he search for Geet with closed eyes on bed but could not find her. he quickly open his eyes... he was Geet standing right in front of him with her back towards him .she was busy painting.
her duppata was flowing with wind & her hairs were again & again disturbing her she was fixing  it behind her ears again & agian. he took her picture .
Maan: smiled  "let me help you.." he grab his crutches try to not to make noise he walk to her ... he placed his hands on her waist ..
Geet: shouted ... Maan
Maan: whisper in her ears" yes i am here"
Geet: you scared life out of me 
Maan: oh sorry he kissed her neck...beautiful...looked at the painting


Geet: what beautiful?
Maan: you
Geet: Maan
Maan: open her hair clip"yes"
Geet: you ..her hairs covered her face. .she try to grab it
Maan: smiled ..kissed her head
Geet: aap ko muhje ko taang karan ka alawa kuch aur aata ha
Maan: no  he pull her more closed..
Geet:why dont you freshen up ?
Maan: why?smell her hairs
Geet: because you have to exercise 
Maan: but i want to do romance.
Geet: Maan
Maan:Geet
Geet: let me finish this
Maan: jee nai i will finish this. he grab brush from her hand
Geet: you are a kid..you will spoil it
Maan: you teach me.  
Geet ok  she hold his hand. Maan placed his chin on her shoulder .with the help of Geet he added few stokes 
Maan: wow Geet see i can do
Geet: smiled  "mera baby i am doing it she she kissed his cheek...
Maan: do you kiss your other student too.. looked in her eyes
Geet: no only my this special student. with Maan hand in hers she gave last touches to the painting.
Maan: tell me what else i do?like a kid he said
Geet:Maan it is finished 
Maan: why you didnot woke me when you started this.
Geet: because you need rest
Maan: made baby face
Geet: grab brush from his hand. smiled  "mera kuchi kuchi baby sad ha "
Maan: yes 
Geet cup his face "promise next time i will make with you"
Maan : pull her more closed kissed her.. "promised whisper "
Geet: shyly "koi dekhe laga"
Maan:  no one will come here . & if  anyone will come the gate keeper will call us "
Geet: oh so you have khuli choti to do masti
Maan: yes ... 
Geet: aap bhi na
Maan: ha mein bhi you have just spoiled me completely..
Geet: smiled chala undar ... 
Maan: Geet i will ask Veer to send car so you can go & buy grocery .
Geet: is he here?
Maan yes
Geet: you will come with me right?
Maan: Geet i can't again & again climb 
Geet: but
Maan: you go with driver.
Geet: but you will be alone ..while fixing hot water for him
Maan: am i kid 
Geet: but if you need  anything
Maan: Geet it will just take hour
Geet: i can't leave you alone.bus.you take shower. 
she walked out.
Maan: pagal.
Geet: made breakfast  "Maan are you ready "
Maan :didnot reply
Geet: Maan do you need help ?
Maan: who was wearing his shirt smiled ... "yes Geet bari prob mein hoon"
Geet: left the breakfast on table went to room "what happen" looked at him dressed up
Maan: smiled kuch nai just teasing you
Geet: aap bhi na Maan 
Maan: give me cell.
Geet; passed him he hold her hand .."ab kya "
Maan: "i love when you show concern"
Geet: pagal ha aap she help him to walk to living room.
Maan: Geet i texted Veer to send car 
Geet: Maan i am not going
Maan :Geet kuch nai hoga muhje ko.
Geet: but i am not going that is final. you have your breakfast & get ready for your therapy .
Maan: but where is ? paused
Geet: waved dvd.." dr gave me this i will play this & you will follow it"
Maan : but while taking his breakfast.
Geet: no if or but finish it.. she played the dvd .  sat near his feet . with the help of dvd she was rubbing his muscles .Maan couldn't take his eyes of her face she was applying medicine circulate her hand.
Maan: from where you learn it?
Geet: ammi was in coma after accident. i saw nurse doing it .
Maan: bas karo  
Geet: why?
Maan: you will get tired 
Geet: i will not...
Maan: grab her hand "don't do it  , i don't like"
Geet: Maan please we are so far from city , here i can't search Dr to help you i have to do it.
Maan: Geet it is useless
Geet: why?
Maan: there is only 10 % chance .
Geet: those 10% chance is 100 for me.
Maan: Geet i did search there is hardly few people who were cured .
Geet: you will be just trust in me & have faith in lord
Maan: pagal ho tum...they heard car voice ..
Geet: yahan kon aaya ha she fixed her duppata."walk to the door ..
Veer: Maan
Maan: geet open veer ha
Geet: hi
Veer: hi gave her a bouquet 
Geet: thx
Maan: hi Veer i asked you to send driver.
Veer: oh driver is on leave that why i came myself, & i had to show Adi the cottage.
Geet: is Adi here
Veer; yes he is,he said Dadi send him
Maan: where is he? he made bad face.
Veer: he was taking snap ,he is out side
Geet: Maan i think you & Veer bhai sit i & Adi will go & get grocery
Maan: bit his lips in anger Veer bhai... But how he will know the way?
Geet: i noticed while coming from Airport i can take him.
Maan: Veer why don't you take her?
Veer: sure
Geet: no thx bhai you site here & discuses your project i will go with Adi. can i have your car key.she placed Maan files & laptop in front of him
Veer: sure.
Maan: wanted to bang his head but he could not help it .just whisper "Geet you have nice luck"
Geet waved him & went out.
ADI: bhabi were are you going
Geet: i am going with you to get grocery .. take this key & driver.
ADI: but i 
Geet: chup you reached here in perfect time
ADI: why?
Geet: Maan your sir was asking me to go with Veer 
ADI: looked at her
Geet: your boss is out of his mind now days , by the way what are you doing here?
ADI: dadi asked me to stay here till sir is not fine
Geet: looked out thinking"Maan i will not let you succeed in pushing me away from you ... what you think i can't read your mind ,or your intention . ladies six sense is more sharp then guys i got what is cooking in your mind.." she smiled.
to be cont. comment if you want more...

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32 comments:

  1. lovelu update.
    i'm glad u r writing :)
    aww so maan called veer over so mayb geet will move on with maan. jhalla hai maan. he has no idea how much geet luvs him. maan u'll have to fight off these crutches for geet :)

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  2. hey loved it..ho i gussd tis was coming up...maan behaving like typical gud husband who loves his wife...but doesnt he realise that geets happiness s with him only...

    hey thanks for the pm..nd glad that you r continuing it here...do update soon...

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  3. Hii amzing upadte and how can Maan even think like tht he is getting mean.


    Amina

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    Dansindiadans

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  4. loved it n as i had thought maan wants geet to go away from him but geet is also sherni maan dont mess with her

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  5. beautiful update
    will be waitin 2 c hw
    geet will foil all maans
    plan that he have been plannin

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  6. glad that u started writing again.

    so i was guessing right about maan's plan.... geet will show him the Real Love now. it is interesting turn.

    cyum321 :)

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  7. wow Yaar, that is really nice!!!

    Geet is so cunning, Maan can't succeed in his plan..
    Poor maan, underestimated her!

    lOVELY UPDATE yaar!
    Plz continue soon!!!
    can't wait to read more

    Veer and Geet? hehee... Maan is out of his mind....
    But not Geet, she will somehow cure Maan and will let down his wired Plan to patch up GEET with VEER!

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  8. awesome udpate Naddiay
    loved it
    so happy geet understood what maan is trying to do and more happy to see that Adi is there

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  9. aaww lovely update.. =]*!~
    thanks GOD u dd stop writting..!!!

    story is going interesting...!!!
    geet's care was adorable..!!

    Update soooonnn!!!

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  10. awesome update
    loved it
    cant wait 4 da next part
    con soon
    thanks 4 da pm
    Kashndsel4eva Xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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  11. awesome!

    continue sooN!

    BY:sweet scorpio

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  12. wow interesting... wonder whats going to happen next

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  13. Hi Naddiya, happy to see that U r writing.Geet is doing so much for Maan.

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  14. Update was superb....but wht is it with veer...Hope maan isn't being pessimistic..geet shuld change him..remoe all his negativity...continue soon..!!

    Rohini

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  15. lovely update
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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  16. wow lovely update...

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  17. wow amazing update...

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  18. Wow yaar amazing update loved it thanks for the pm.

    Raman

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  19. hiii naddy....
    its imply awesome....
    loved it
    thnxxx for continuing writing....
    come back to IF yaar...
    ppl miss u...
    the mod has shifted all the FFs mentioned by u to fanfic........
    u have got justice...
    just come back dear
    so many ppl love u and miss u...
    hopw to see u back in IF soon
    keep writing
    love u and ur ffs

    reva

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  20. wow so sweet maan naughty so cute both made for each other thank you for update dear miss you ...conti soon.

    Monika

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  21. nadiya loved it a lot dear thanks a lot for PM
    SONA

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  22. loved the updte...........i am not sure if i am getting it right.......geet & veer is that wat maan trying to do

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  23. that was great
    plz continue soon

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  24. Awesome update.... loved it

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  25. thanku so much dear for the update....!
    do continue soon!!!!!!
    please come back to IF soon!!!!!

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  26. Loved it Nadddiya.
    Veer & Geet???? what is Maan thinking yaar. May God help him

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  27. Loved it... Maan say Saiya Saiya... n Geet say Bhaiya Bhaiya... so what will Veer do now????

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  28. heyy nadia ....

    thnx ... thnx a tonne .... 4 writing again ...

    comig back to d update .. it was nice ...

    luved it ....

    thnx 4 d pm ....

    plzzz .. plzzzzzzz ... yaar .. update .. ur

    other ff .. simply love .. as well ... plzzz

    ..'m desperately waiting 4 dat ....

    plzzzzzzzzzzzzz ......

    continue both d ff's soon ...

    luv ...

    angel ...

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  29. Lovely part dear, please do continue ur ff's, don't stop at all, you have a great writing skills.

    Soni

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  30. hey nadya!! thank u sooo much for the pm!!
    i loved ur update..
    awesome update..

    dollie16(hafsah)

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